Shimmer. - Comments

this pretty much just made my morning :) haha i like that john didn even get her number, its like the whole, if its meqnt to be we'll meet again, thing. which i totally love :) nyway awesome update! i cant wait for the next one :)

I'm so amazed by this story. You both are such unique writers and the differences between each other seem to balance each other out. The first chpater in the present was so sad and then the second, in the past, had like... comedic relief.... like I said amazing,

Anywyas, I'm from arizona and I don't know if the writer from Arizona is to, but I just have to say I LOVE her for saying the Wildcats are better. I absolutely hate the sun devils. Its just cool to see that you actually used a school in az (chandler) that school is huge and i'm just gonna stop now cause I'm rambling :)

Great job. The both of you and I can't wait for what's next!

They are so cute together <3 I can't wait for the next updat!!

awwwww...
this chapter is adorable :3
<3

Homaaygoossshh they were so adorable!
And I love how quick-witted they both are

awee they were so cute in the past!(: ya'll are great writers and i cant wait till the next update!

great story so far

LOVE ITTand serious stories are awesome, cause sadly alot of times they are the real ones :( but i cannot wait for the update!!! and for this whole story to unravel!

I am so excited for this :) its sad though :/ but i dont care i love it please update more soon!<3 i cant even tell you how excited i am XD

Aww, the first chapter really made me sad. But I'm stoked as hell!

I can already tell that this will be a beautiful story. <3

This is amazing already. I'm very excited to see where this story is heading(;

This is amazing already <3

love it! so different!

Silent house! the dixie chicks :) mhmmm reminds me of this :)

i heard a song today at work that remeinded me of this story. when i think of it ill let you know... haha

Dude. This first chapter. I can't even explain how amazing I thought it was. Just how you're conveying everything is so good. It's completely heartbreaking, but also makes you fall for both the characters. It makes you need to know exactly what happened, and what's going to happen next.
Girl, it's so good! You are amazing!
Update again soon please!!
<3

YOU ALMOST MADE ME CRY. DON'T DO THAT.

-sobs in a corner- JERK. JERK.

Okay, update soon. <3

I'm in love with this already. The first chapter was so powerful and heart-wrenching. I can't wait for the rest.

So, I finally looked at the story and I'm so glad. It's been so long since I've read a well-written angsty type fic that wasn't overly cliche and filled with eventual happy endings. And this looks to be more serious and can't wait to read more of it. Now for the story itself, I can't to find out what's really happened between John and Rosemary.They seem to be incredibly broken and miserable. I'm really looking forward to this story. <3 Update soon? :)