Fluorescent Adolescent. - Comments

I loved your story! It had so much emotion in it. i knew i'd have to finish it even tho i wanted to cry with camille. im so happy he led her back to herself in the end! <3

I seriously loved this story...

Sad it's over, butttt I liked how it ended. :3

thats was like the perfect ending to this story. I loved ever moment of reading it. I think if you really wanted to you could make a career out of this. You are very talented. <3 aj

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I loved this ending. Josh didn't only convince her to believe in love again, he convinced her to forgive also. I also loved the last two lines...they summed up Josh and Camille's relationship completely.

ohmyfuckinggawd im so sad that this story is over, but i still fucking loved it. & you are by far my fucking favourite writer on here, and i am toots going to read all your stories. kay, im done. but i still loved this story so much & if i was camille i wouldnt have forgiven her father.

ohmyfuckinggawd im so sad that this story is over, but i still fucking loved it. & you are by far my fucking favourite writer on here, and i am toots going to read all your stories. kay, im done. but i still loved this story so much & if i was camille i wouldnt have forgiven her father.

ohmyfuckinggawd im so sad that this story is over, but i still fucking loved it. & you are by far my fucking favourite writer on here, and i am toots going to read all your stories. kay, im done. but i still loved this story so much & if i was camille i wouldnt have forgiven her father.

the ending was absolutely beautiful :)
you're such a great writer :)

I thought the ending was perfect, it fits who they are as a couple. I'm excited for uneasy hearts to keep going on though, you're a lovely writer (:

I'm so glad Camille's mom finally talked some sense into her! I had a feeling Hanna was going to come in and interrupt Camille's speech. At least Josh told Hanna that it's Camille he loves. Now he just has to chase after her.

I'm so glad Camille told Josh how she really feels! Stupid Hanna for interrupting -.- But I have a good feeling that Josh may leave Hanna for Camille. :)

That was the most beautiful chapter i have read. god damn ever.

Omg this chapter I perfect! So sad that next chapter is the last ):

Finally they both do something about it! I can't wait for the last chapter even though it's ending :(

So, So good. Keep up the great work!

I hope you know that I almost yelled out you until I read the end bit where Josh said he needed to talk to Hana *nods* You nearly got a verbal smackdown ;) SOOOOOOOOOOOOO happy that Josh is breaking it off with Hana for Camille! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

This chapter is very emotional!
Camille was trying to hate her father because he not only broke her mother but her too.
And she sees that her mother strong despite how much pain her ex husband out her through.
One good thing is Camille, he gave her mother Camille and that is the person her mother loves more than anything in the world.
And I bet Camille has gotten the courage because her mother is still waiting for that one person to come and sweep her off her feet since her and Camille's father won't meant to be.
But it's going to take Camille a very long time or maybe never before she can ever forgive her father for deceiving them.
Camille finally got the courage and told Josh the truth how not only her father but he also messed up her view on men up.
Camille tried to date boys again but she always compared them to Josh and he was the one that made her feel so many things.
I can't wait for the next and final update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I want to read the last chapter, but I don't want this to end! Sigh* This chapter was amazing. Cam finally said it! Update soon please! Don't leave us hanging!

JOSH GO AFTER HER WHAT ARE YOU DOING????
sigh. i can't believe this is almost over :(