rawr DX she is gonna end up with cole! noooo I have been team Parker this entire time!! lol I am disapointed lol I thought for once this wasdnt gonna be a best friends end up lovers stories! ugh oh well its still a great story im just disapointed
AH. Carter should of just told Cole in the first place. D: But since she didn't, she should've just told him why she didn't tell him! He coulda believed her. But Lily is an asshole and I hate her asshole-ish guts so she can die in a hole. Along with Skye. Ugh. The fact that he chuckled about what happened just made me wanna slap a bitch. Ah, anyways...YES I AM EXCITED TO SEE HOW THIS ENDS.
OH MY GOD CAN YOU JUST PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PLEASE. Skye is fucking up this whole school and I really really don't like Lily. I never did. But now I hate her. so please update soon(-: and please excuse me while I write Lily on a piece of paper and throw darts at it.
CAN YOU UPDATE SOON. PLEASE. I REALLY REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. Skye seriously needs to get humiliated or embarrassed at least once... right? Anyways, I found this yesterday and I'm in love. So yeah(-:
AND I FOUND THE FACT THAT DAVE RICHARDSON'S GAY AND PARKER'S MOM DIDN'T KNOW pretty funny. no I'm totally joking, it was friggin hilarious! smfh(-:
Was it just me or did someone else notice that she was going to kill herself? Pretty obvious clues you gave out. The giving away music, not talking, ditching, being uncaring towards things was obvious. Good job! :3 Also, you should've introduced Parker before because when I first started reading of him, I was pretty confused. I thought you had an error and just put Parker instead of Cole?
Wait, is Parker the guy that lives near her and goes to the rival school to hers? Hm.
Poor Tifanny, I knew there was something wrong with Skye. I'm pretty sure this has happened in real life and I'm ashamed of humanity. We have a conscious and we think yet we don't put things to work positively.
Your story is amazing, it just has a few minor typos and errors other than that it's great! xo
i knew it! i fucking knew it! D: right when she was like "well usually tiffany's here." "OH DAMN SHE'S DEAD." and then i scolded myself for having a twisted mind... -_-' well this sucks. i was starting to like tiffany...anywhooo, i love this chapter, update soon. <3 and queeeeestion...what's going on with lily/cole?
I am so thankful you put this up on Mibba! I remember this from Quizilla and when I got bored of the site with the WWFFY quizzes and cheesy writing I was sad that I was leaving a few good series behind, including yours. I remember looking through original fiction here and then finding this and say: Oh my goodness. Oh my freaking goodness. Don't get too excited, this might not be it. But it was. :) Best part? I can actually subscribe on this site. Wonderful writing!
Dang, I was really hoping Carter would have told Cole what happened with Lilly and Skye. I want some drama for my mama! D: But I'm glad Audrey & Carter are friend's again. They seem inseparable, and Nina was just trying (and failing) to separate them! :O Great shapta. :D