The Richardson List - Comments

Yes all these sexy bitches lets meet Lily! DO ITTTT. And I wanna hear about this effing list!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I'VE MISSED THIS EVEN THOUGH I TOTALLY ALREADY KNOW WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN COS I WAS A DEVOTED READER BACK ON QZ EVEN THOUGH I NEVER MESSAGED YOU BECAUSE YOU WERE INTIMIDATING AND I WAS ELEVEN WHEN I READ IT.

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I love Cole. Audrey's alright. One of my best friend's is named Audrey so I think I'm inclined to like this Audrey. I find it cool how you put Skye (which is generally associated with as a girls name) as the guy's name and Carter (which is unisex but whatever) as the girls name.

Quizilla's deleted all my shit as well which fucking pissed me off, what the hell is wrong with them?

Skye sounds hot, he really does. Despite the fact that he comes off as a little arrogant, I'm liking him already. I'm just a sucker for those hot, mysterious, arrogant guys in stories. :D

Cole sounds like an absolute sweetie and he seems so loyal to Carter, it's so cute :D And Audrey seems like a really good friend.

Dammit, why did you have to end this chapter with so many questions burning in the reader's mind? I'M DYING TO KNOW MORE ABOUT SKYE AND THE LIST. I wonder what Carter's role in the list is, dun dun dun. ;o

Ahah this was beauitful! Skye is quite lovely my deary.

I WAS WONDERING WHY THIS WAS SO FAMILIAR! YESSSSS! Happy day! I loved this story when I read it on Quizilla! :DDDD

I'M GOING TO READ THIS.
Sounds freaking awesome. I thought Carter was a boy. But then I realised you kept using the word 'her' instead of him and then yeah. I felt stupid.
Cole seems like a cool person.
So does Carter.
BTW you're a great writer <3

awh yeah !
So glad to see this again, haha. It's been a while since I read it so this gives me the chance to do so again :) I always loved this story. Carter's so easy to relate to and Skye's a real troublemaker. And Cole . . . oh Cole, you have my heart. Always have, always will.
And it's nice to see what layout you put with the story! It really helps with the mood of it, and it's super pretty. Can't wait to read the rest! I haven't been on Quizilla in God-knows-how-long so it'll be a lot easier to read it again here.
*subscribing!*

Fuck yeah

I never read this on Quizilla, but everyone was always telling me to read it and I was all "grumbleno" because I am a lazy person. BUT NOW IT HAS ARRIVED HERE BEAUTIFULLY! And thank God it will be updated quickly because I've got a lot of reading to doo....

Thank you, you're lovely

GURL, I LOVE YOUR LAYOUT. WHY DO YOU ALWAYS MAKE PRETTY LAYOUTS? WHY? WHY? WHY?

I thought Skye was a girl. *giggles* But I like the fact that you called the guy Skye, it's a unique name and I like the impression that you're giving the reader, using your fab method of show and not tell, that Skye is one hell of an intimidating person. AND I THOUGHT CARTER WAS A BOY. LOL. *giggles again* I like how you used a traditionally male name for a girl and a traditionally female name for a boy. xD

But anyway, I love this story already. I'm interested in getting to know Skye a lot more. :3 I'm subscribing because this just reeks of awesomeness already. <3

I remember this. & I know you don't want like 90% of your comments consisting of those three words but hey, it's the truth so.... yup. Anyways, I already read all of the story, of course. So I don't know if I want to follow this story on mibba. I don't think I'll subscribe, but I guess I'll bookmark and stalk it for updates, y'know... because I think you're editing it? Correct me if I'm wrong. -___-

Well, this hasn't been a very ... useful comment? I like to give those but meh, not my forte. :] So, I absolutely adore your layout. It makes the story look all serene but once you read the short summary, "Nobody's safe from The Richardson List."

Yeah, it doesn't sound all rainbow and sun-shiney.

The name on everyone's lips and dancing down everyone's tongues..."

Okay so, I am not a writer. I don't claim to be a writer. But as a reader, I found this line sort of weird. I can't really pin-point why! It's just, I don't know. Maybe it's just me :|

Alright, now to the actual chapter. So you're talking about Carter walking to school. & you like chuck a heck ton of sentences at me. I skimmed it [don't take offence!] and what I get from it is that she's really tired but, I don't know, it gives off this really chill vibe about her. I guess that's good, me having a first impression of her. Or well, maybe not. Depends on what you wanted aha.

"As she walked, her raven lcoks of hair were..."

Lookie, I found a typo :3

I'm sorry, I'm really too lazy to read it all, maybe because I've read it already, I think I should try and erase everything I know about it... Well anyways, I'd just like to say that you've got a fine story in your hands and that I love the name Skye.

That is all xD

I totally remember this story from Quizilla. I never got around to finishing it, but I remember that I loved it. It'll be nice to be able to actually finish it this time. Hopefully. Considering I'm a compulsive procrastinator. But alas, this story is too good to pass up.

I love the layout, by the way; it's gorgeous.

I know I've said this a million times before, but it's true; your writing is fabulous. You descriptions and your adjectives just all flow really nicely, and you seem to have a knack for character development which definitely adds to my enjoyment. :D This is great, Gabby. <3

P.S. My mind will be forever blown knowing that you're ItsDebeatable from Quizilla. I don't think any number of psychiatrists will ever get me to recover from this shock. Seriously.

I really like this. I like Cole the best out of the three characters that were introduced, his personality is something I'd like in a person.

I love this!!!!!!! I'm subscribing!

Wow, I remember this story from Quizzy, and lets just say it was my favourite. I'm so glad you posted this, because I love reading it over and over again ^-^