If We Ever Meet Again - Comments

I love it so don't even think about changing it!!!!! Just update it!!!

Love the new update

I really like this story and would like to see how it would end up. I've read plenty of avenged sevenfold fan fiction but this is definitely worth reading. Personally I think you could add maybe more detail to the story, there a lot of concepts here that you could exploit to take the story the further but then again this could be just me. I love the lay out also. Very simple and doesn't distract from the story but pleasant enough to look at. I hope you'll keep working on this :) i think i'll hit the subscribe button just to see how this wraps up.

whoa did not think Zacky's surprise was gunna be that!

fsfsdfb . can't wait for the next update. oh, and in response to your question, she NEEDS to end up with Brian. ^_^

hmmm what is gonna happen next? lol so curious!!! update soon please!
Anna

Love this story alot. I want Skye and Jimmy together. More please

I'm assuming this is a fan-fiction, so there will be some thing I don't understand, but, assessing it independently of that, I thought it was quite good. You are a fluid writer, and you have some understanding of what makes a good plot. I particularly liked your use of foreshadowing in the line, 'There's no such thing as monsters'.

I am kind of curious as to why no relationship was facilitated by two siblings split-up by the foster/adoption system? Maybe things work differently in America to what I'm used to here.

This, though, would be my only real question about the concept you have. Overall, you seem to write neatly, you are very readable, and everything is sound.

The colour scheme in the layout is also quite effective.

I skimmed around the chapters a little bit and I really like it! You are pretty descriptive, that's a reall good thing for a story. I could picture it in my head like a movie. It was pretty good !

Oooohhhhh shit gena is in town. Can't wait to read what's next lol.
Anna

I love this update :)
Uh drama, can't wait to read it! :D

I read the first two chapters, and this is pretty good. I usually dislike a7x fics, because from what i've seen they're all the same, but this one isn't. there's actually a legitimate plot. kudos!

I can't think of any criticism, except maybe that the fight between Matt and Skyler's parents seemed rushed and barely explained. It's kinda weird for everything to be okay one second, and then for a wife to go psycho, stab her husband and set the house on fire the next. Work on your transitions.

Other than that, this was good :). No major grammar mistakes, pretty good detail. Good job.

Hey...I've already commented on this one. Lol. Its really good so far. I love the layout!

Oh shit zacky fucks up! What is next? Lol update soon Please!
Anna

I just found this story, and you know what? I love it! :D

First of all, the layout was done wonderfully, as was the banner. The colors go pretty well together and the whole image just flows. As for the summary, I never knew Matt has three "t"s in his name (joke - I just noticed that and thought you should know :D) and while I'm not one for brother-sister relationships, this does perk my interest:)

Onto the latest chapter:

i soon shoo him out of my room, heading to the bathroom to shower. The "i" needs to be capitalized :)

I was also wondering if being italized was what you were going for? Because I was a bit confused why it was all italic.

Besides those two things, this story from what I read definitely has high potential on my list of awesome stories, though now I'm curious about the relationships. From the summary, I thought it was MattxSkye, but then the dream I was think "Andrew and Skye...?" But when it was finished I was definitely yelling at my computer "Is it Zacky and Skye?!? Who is it!! XD" So you definitely perked my interest. Later, I will probably go back and read the whole thing:)

Awesome job <3

Very good. I liked it a lot.

i really like this, i don't usually like band fanfictions but i really like the concept you've come up with. I can't wait to read the rest of this, it's interesting and like i already said really good. The first chapter was just amazing sad and morbit but was really good

It was all a dream!! D: Aww... I really wanted it to be true. :’( But still is really good! The bonding is nice. Can’t wait to see what you have in store next. :)

Ok, so I only read the first couple chapters, and I have to say that this is really different. I've always read about the Avenged guys having siblings that they were separated from, but they are nothing like this one. I'm really looking forward to coming back and reading more of this when I have more time! Skye is so realistic! And the first chapter was just...holy shit, man. Morbid. O: In a good way. xD