Ghosts - Comments

I'm drooling over your layout!
Ahh this is amazing! I love original fiction and I love creative ideas! Your characters are pretty awesome too! You have great words that paint a good picture! :) good job!

What... the fuck. I just red 5 chapters for time's sake, but that's possibly the worst place I could have have stopped. My question of what the fuck is in reference to so many things, THE FREAKY FLESH EATING THINGS WITH THOSE HORRIFYING TEETH. Like what the actual hell are those? I mean I'll probably find out when I come back to read, but y'know. I'm in the dark for now. The other question is about the man with the blue eyes, if you could actually call him a man. He seems more extraordinary than that. I think it's so awesome he always seems to show up when Alex needs him. I'm also curious as to why she stopped believing in God. Surely it's deeper seeded than she was just "tired" of not being able to see or touch Him. Her history and how she ended up this way is something I'm very interested in learning. I became very said when Katie met her fate, she seemed to really mean so much to Alex. The way that she'd taken care of her was enough to prove that. Overall, this is a very interesting story and I have indeed subscribed so I can come back to this later. Keep the good work up! :) ❤

I really love this so far, honestly it's brilliant. The plot is so original, and you've worked it to the fullest. They layout is pretty, again maybe not the easiest to read, but I still like it. I noticed a few grammatical and spelling mistakes through out, but since you have so many chapters, it may not be that easy to go back over them. I think it was very clever how at the start you couldn't tell the gender of that character, that was a very nice addition to this story. Your writing is so descriptive, it allows you to imagine everything like it's a film playing out in front of you. Amazing work here!

I seriously love this story so far! It's probably my favorite thing I've read on here in a very long time. It's such an interesting premise and not something I've ever read about before. I've only read the first two chapters, but I already love the characters, they're so real and fleshed out, they feel like the could be real people. I loved how in the first chapter you made it so you couldn't really tell the gender of the protagonist until the very end, that was a cool technique. Your writing really paints an image and I can see what is happening without you using too many words. This is seriously just great, I'm gonna recc and subscribe, and come back to read the rest of this later :)

@ yukinoshita yukino;
I definitely want to revisit this story and update it entirely. I have changed the direction in which I want it to go since first writing it, and I love going back and figuring out different things to do with the story to help it move along better. There are some things I've learned since this first came out and definitely mistakes I need to correct. I am entirely excited to write it over though, my writing style has changed over the years.

Thanks for the read.

The summary you have up is so intriguing, a person just has to read it. :] But I really like how this reads like a person's pattern of thought. It gives a good amount of insight to the main character. I've only been through the first six chapters, but there are just spelling errors and some missing punctuation marks. Still, the story is very interesting.

I noticed you wrote this story a couple years ago. :] Do you ever consider rewriting it to see how it turns out? My writing style changed a lot in two years, so when I try to update an older story it seems disjointed.

Anyways, I'll continue reading and I can't wait to see what you decide to do with this story. :]

First of all... SAD FACE THAT HE CAN'T LOVE!! That must really suck. Second. SAD FACE THAT HER PARENTS ARE DEAD!! That must REALLY suck. And lastly... SAD FACE ABOUT BUG BITES!! I KNOW those suck, having about forty of them myself. Also, you update fast. I'm jealous.

I love how fast you update. :D

this is new to me too so i'm just gonna go with it :D

You are on a role girl 3 or 4 chapters in a day i wish i can do that!

thanks :) ill try to work on my spacing a bit.

I was a little apprehensive about this because I'm not big on the whole angels and demons and such thing. But I'm glad I read this because I love all the twists and turns and it's really well written.

My only thing is space between paragraphs. You were doing it in the beginning but there are chapters where it's not spaced, so it makes it a little hard to read. I know that that is how you write in books, but online it just helps when they're spaced out more. :)

But like I said, I'm really enjoying this story and I'm so subscribing to it.
:)

Got u and also i agree angel arent perfect bcause i was talking to my dad about this he said god bfore wasnt as good as he is now if you no wat i mean

i love that movie!!!
and god is kind of letting things play out. again in legion remember how he kind of let things happen kind of the same only dylan is going on his own on this. god isn't really objecting to what dylan is doing so hes letting it happen.

PSS if u wwatch Legion Gabriel is a ass hole in that one to but Micheal is BAD ASS!!
YEAH!!

Wow Dylan has some anger issues but i would to if she just tries to save herself and not let me save john. But i guess if they did She maybe dead and then she cant kill Gabriel!

PS where is God in all of this again why isnt he stopping it?
Trust wondering

I love this story! *subscribes*

It's really well written, and theres a heck of a lot of plot twists!!
I didn't think Angels could be such assholes.... Man..... Dylans so MEAN!!!!

Wow, I really do love this story :) I'll definately be reading more of this! *subscribe*

Ill definitely spread the word for u!! lol

Haha my boyfriend uses it occasionally