Capture My Heart - Comments

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this its amazing!!!

Love this story!!!! Update soon

i love this story. please continue and finish it.

I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like how descriptive you are in your writing. How you "paint pictures with your words" as I like to say. I can visualize exactly what is going on throughout your stories and I love that. I’m very visual person and when I can’t picture the setting and what the characters are doing it frustrates me and I loose interest. I love your characters and the romance that slowly and sweetly develops instead of jumping right in like most of the stories I’ve read here on mibba. Jacob and Violets moment was so sweet and perfect in this last chapter :)I also like how you play the characters emotions just right so that I can feel exactly what it’s like to be them. You’re an awesome writer, please never stop! And please don’t take that long of a break! I was dying wondering when you were going to update again!

wait, it was chapter 34, right when they escaped

hi! my names mandy and ive been reading your story as much as i can for the past week. im on chapter 32 and hope to read all the chapters youve written so far before i go to bed. i lovvvvvvveeeee this story! your an amazing author, are you sure your 14??? i think i read that on your profile. im a secrete twi-hard and love jacob so much. this story is awesome and your incredibly talented and creative to make up all this stuff about the other weres and violets powers and being marked and all. please please please write more and more and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay!! less depressing stuff!!!

:D!!! smile smile! They got aaway!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice chapter!

LOVE IT (in a sing song voice) one of the best creative Jacob Black stories I've read:)

Nice Nice! I like!! Update soon!

Still my favorite story! :)

Thanks for the comment, you just made my day :)

I love it !:) keep going!