Breaking the Rules of Bat Country - Comments

  • synfull

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    Briaaaaan! God, why couldn't he just say it? He's been waiting for that moment and then he just wimps out?! And Johnny, ugh. I'm really starting to hate him. He's like a mini-Matt now. I seriously can't wait for you to start the sequel. I'm just hoping that it's Brian and Bailey that end up together... if it's anyone else, I might cry.
    July 28th, 2012 at 10:23pm
  • helena_88

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    oh god you actually made me cry.. why oh why couldn't he just open his mouth and say those 3 words back to her?? frickin hell Cry and johnny WHAT A DOUCHE :O can't wait for part2 <3
    July 28th, 2012 at 09:46pm
  • Churro88

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    Great update as usual! I wish Brian would just TELL HER already! There isn't really ever going to be a perfect moment for them lol. Someone is always going to interrupt them. Matt definitely needs some anger management classes.
    July 27th, 2012 at 10:56pm
  • synfull

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    Oh my God, Zack's balls flapping in the wind. I think I died laughing. And then I got pissed realizing he cut them off right when Brian was going to confess his feelings. Ughh! I don't think I've ever been so in love and frustrated with a story in my entire life. I felt like shaking my laptop while screaming "TELL HER!!!" I'm really sorry about your dog though. I know what that's like and it sucks but at least she's not in pain anymore. :[
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Nia_Flores

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    Why didn't she let him tell her?!?!? Seriously!??!?! And what an asshole Matt's being!!! This story is killing me slowly!! SLOWLY!!! What a great update! I'm sure shit's about to hit the fan & I can' wait. Mr. Green
    July 25th, 2012 at 10:39pm
  • helena_88

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    so sorry about your dog Sad

    matt.. wow, he just hit a new low.. O_o
    zacky.. that mental image of his balls flying all over the place O_o hahahahahahahahah Mr. Green

    oh man!! Brian was soooooooooooo close to finally saying that he loves her.. GRR zee's timing sucks!! Mr. Green
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    The whole Brian/Bailey thing is irritating me. >< They just need to admit their damn feelings for each other already! And he was so close, and she had to tell him to wait until he felt the timing was perfect! He could've just continued despite that, but now he's acting pissy. And I can't believe Matt would say those things! Asshole. I'm scared that he'll blow up big time soon. Loved the update! :D

    And sorry to hear about your dog. :( I know that's tough to go through.
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:16pm
  • R...

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    I really like this story alot.

    Sorry you didnt make Idol and Im very sorry for your loss of your beloved dog.
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:41am
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    I really like this story alot.

    Sorry you didnt make Idol and Im very sorry for your loss of your beloved dog.
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:41am
  • SweetPea

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    I am so pissed at Bailey! She...ugh!!!!
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:07am
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    and p.s.
    i'm Team Johnny. first loves are always the way to go. not that I wanna see Brian hurt or anything. And Shari definitely needs Zack.
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:28am
  • Jorel Decker.

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    Bailey is so sensitive, ugh. it's like annoying.
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:23am
  • PaleIsSexy

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    I am so sorry about your dog! At least she's out of pain though!! And this chapter is probably one of my favorites!(: I can't wait for the next one!!
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • XxRebeccaLeexX

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    I loved this update, but I am kinda pissed at Bailey for being kinda a bitch to Brian.
    Then again, I am kinda pissed at Brian for being a pussy and not just saying his feeling.
    Anyways, I'm sorry that you didn't make it past auditions. I bet the experience was still fun!
    Update soon! :)
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • bambx7x

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    Brea, you are one amazing writer. I love this!!! Fucking Zack though. What timing! I can't wait for the next one!!
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:35am
  • WildAutumnCombs

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    C'mon, let's give us update!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • pixiesticks650

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    I don't know if you did this intentionally, but I like how you had Bailey say that she needed to "face Shadows head on." Because he really isn't their friend Matt right now, is he?
    Also, I'm really glad that Bailey is coming to the realization that Johnny just isn't right for her.
    July 20th, 2012 at 12:51pm
  • Babydoll420

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    I Love how you have made the story so far. You are doing grate, The emotion in the story is really strong and powerful. The whole Plot line Pulls the reader in to want to read more. You haven't put to much detail to the point it drags on. It's just grate! you are an amazing writer. You should give you're self a pat on the back. c:
    July 19th, 2012 at 09:42am
  • Brain Dead Bipolar

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    Oh my sweet Johnny. DON'T LET HER GET WITH JOHNNY. xD As much as I love my little short shit, he's just... he's not good in this story... he's not good for Bailey. I realllllllllllly want her to be with Brian and Matt needs to just stfu. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapters and the sequel!!
    July 16th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • Caught In A Mosh

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    Ok, I know this is highly unlikely but could Bailey possibly end up with Johnny? Just for a bit? Please? Oh and great story by the way, can't wait for the rest :]
    July 16th, 2012 at 12:57am