Breaking the Rules of Bat Country - Comments

@ bri.iero
i know. but when i first started writing it, i was trying to keep it as realistic as possible. since he had already passed, i just kept it that way in the story. but i do have a jimmy story! :) i haven't updated it in awhile, but i am going to start working on the next chapter after i finish this one-shot i am currently working on.

@ gates guardian.
I know now! I'm sorry. I just read a few more chapters. It was midnight wen I started your story so I was tired and was like wtf is going on?! I totally get it though now! I will say I'm a little bummed jimmy isn't in the story other than the flashbacks. I love jimmy

@ bri.iero
oh, no, no... lol bailey was in junior high whenever she met johnny. and then they got back together whenever she was 15 and she slept with him at 16. she's just talking about the past. in the story she is 25.

I'm only in the first chapter I like it so far but there's one thing that bugged me. You said the girls were sixteen and sophomores, the guys are nineteen and graduated. Then it goes on to say that Bailey lost her virginity to Johnny ten years ago. That makes her six and him nine right? I may be confused since I'm only in the first chapter but overall it is a good start.

@ Leaving Memories
ok, i believe i fixed it! lol.

@ Leaving Memories
it's okay, girl! haha. :)

@ gates guardian.
I'm sorry you had to do that, but thank you.

@ Leaving Memories
i went ahead & just deleted the layout for now.

@ Leaving Memories
i will have to mess with it when i get home. it's messed up for some reason. whenever you click on custom/default layout, it's readable! thank you for letting me know though!

@ Leaving Memories
oh, really? that's weird. i will have to look at it. i messed my layout yesterday. so that could've messed it up or something. i don't know if it looks like that on my phone. i'll check it out.

Umm, I really would like to read this story, but when I click into a chapter, all the words are overlapped onto each other. I don't know if it's just this story, because all the other stories I'm reading on Mibba are perfectly fine, but I don't know if you can fix this or not. It'd be wonderful if you could, so I can read it. Just thought I'd let you know. Thanks, bye.

Brian, Brian, Brian. What the hell?! Ugh. He better get his act together! But anyways, this was an AMAZING story and can't wait to see what happens next!

... Seriously, Haner? *sigh.* I guess I can see why he freaked out, BUT STILL. What the fuck? Can't wait for the sequel. You've left us hanging!

BRIAN!!!! OMG!!! HOW STUPID CAN HE BE?!?!??! SERIOUSLY!?!?!? I mean... WTF! I can't wrap my head about what just happened!!!! How could he not say it back?!?!?!??!?!? He's been wanting to tell her, & when she does... he freaks out!!!!! I want to smack him until my hand falls off!!! He just pissed me off!!!!

Anyways... I'm really looking foward to the sequel!!! This story just left a lot of loose ends that I love. I really want to know what the deal with Matt is! I´m team Matt all the way (I've always been), so I'm really looking foward to see his character develop more!!! & right now, even when I'm pissed at Brian, I still don't want her to end up with Johnny! He's a douche!!!!

I'm really sad this story is over, but I couldn't have asked for a better ending. I'll just be awaiting the sequel.

Omg Brian is stupid he kinda did the same thing zack did! Ugh this just Ay

wow, i could strangle brian. he has pretty much placed bailey in johnny's hands! his own fault though.
what is up with matt? i think someone is afraid of sharing his feeling... he really doesn't like to share.
shit is going to go down in the sequel, especially with what you told me :O

I'm so pissed he didn't say it back....just like Zacky..

Brea... I'm about to kick your beautiful ass... OH MY GOD! SERIOUSLY?!

WHAT THE FUCKING FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO ME, BREA?!?!?!? I'M CRYING, DUDE. okay, meltdown over. wait, no it's not because BAILEY FINALLY TOLD BRIAN THAT SHE LOVED HIM!!! ♥ but he didn't say it back :( and holy jeez, johnny, you dick >:( (what's with all these emoticons...? lmao) and brian with his crying. dude, we're on the same boat UGH. now i'm just rambling about crying and brian and bailey and i'm seriously trying to brace myself for BTP because if i'm almost crying and freaking out now, I CAN ONLY I M A G I N E what's you're brewing up and i feel like i've said this a million times but it's true! *HEAVING SIGH* now, about The Exception... ;)

What?! D: No Brian! You idiot, why? I cried, too. Poor Bailey. :'( Finally says it, and Brian's too much of an idiot to say it back. I think he might have screwed himself over, too, but I hope not. And Johnny's a douchebag. I hate him just as much as Matt. >< But I can't wait for the sequel to see what happens. :)