I really like your story!!! Marley is an amazing person giving up her career. She could have let her sister go live with foster parents but she was brave enough to step up and take care of her half-sister. Rhia is really rude but I'm glad that she is slowly building her relationship with Marley. I really can't wait to read more!!!
Well I decided to be the first one to comment Yay! Anyways I really like the idea you have so more soon pretty please with a motherfuckin cherry on top :)