Chex Mix - Comments

Amazing! I love this story! Hope you continue it! (:

I love this awesome story but Seth is my favorite he's just so lovable I want to give him a big bear hug haha :P :)

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7. Ah, Seth just makes me want to sprout <3333333333 everywhere!
an angel from Mars - who else would think that there are angels on Mars?
Oh yes I do want a hug from Seth :D
8. Why is it that when I get to read Ananda's part, I'm always eating something? I hope she really is done barfing now.
Oooh, Paulie's interesting here. So he started this thing.
9. Because he's cute and he's dorky and he's of the male species, and speaking to them is a rarity in this world for me. - :D Just by these lines, I hope they end up together. They would be so cute!
I'm starting to really like Ry now too. I can totally relate to the "I want friends" thing and I think she's very brave to say that aloud.
Whutt?? What happened? At first I thought she was talking about Dessie.
10. Paulie's smart. That was funny of him to stare at Ananda like that. :)
:DDDDDD Seth is so adorable! <3
11. The author's note was funny :) I love how Dessie stays in character but you can tell that there's more to her.
12. :( Poor, dear Owen.
13. Hahaha! That's just funny how Seth thinks Paulie would kiss him when both of them have been accused of being gay.
14. One of my ‘friends’ named Jenny, who looks a lot like the rest of the girls at the table so I can’t really be sure if it was Jenny - Ananda's awesome.
For some reason, the last line sounds like the perfect ending to this chapter.
15. Awww, Seth is clumsy too. <3
16. Paulie and Dessie make me smile. :)
This really is a family reunion—but not. - awesome line.
17. This is really interesting. I wasn't expecting learning anything with this story but that stuff about anorexia was informative. I didn't know people named it like that.
But aside from that, I kind of actually find this chapter too repetitive. Like it's saying too much stuff that's already been said. This chapter would be I think better if it ended after she takes the carrot. Well, not really like end there, but like after that, just skip quickly to the Owen part.
18. Yeah, I did notice that Owen's chapter was very poetic. <3 I can't wait to learn more abour him.
19. Seth's mind is so strange. So very strange. Rainbows? But the strangeness is endearing though. :)
20. I like the way Ananda talks. It's closer to "I want adventure!" than "I'm a well-rounded person." :) And I did actually enjoy this chapter.
21.I don't know what to say. Poor Ry for having a boring life? Can't wait to know more about her hallucinations.
22. What? Paulie's a girl-crazy? I thought he would only want Dessi.
Actually, Paulie seems like he's just crazy. I thought his grandma was the weird one, but he's the one talking to dolls.

Oh, I actually finished it. Haha. In a way, I guess it's a good thing that the chapters are pretty short. :)

Shock and wonder. That's what the summary leaves me with. Those five wishes were all light and optimistic which makes the sixth wish that much jarring. I can't wait to read more! Plus, the layout looks great!

1. I love this already. (Because I have a crush named Seth. Haha!) I love the picture of the name present in each chapter. It's small details like that that show the author (in this case, the authors) shows that she is really working hard to make this story the best.
I love how this starts. It's so funny!
I’ve never understood why there were slits in there until that moment: it was so kids who got shoved into lockers had a way of seeing into the outside world. - I love this line. And I have a feeling you guys'll get tired of me using the word "love."
The young, handsome (yes, I have to say handsome every time) - this line has me laughing.
It’s like, her eyes are a safe, and something about her makes me want to crack the code to it. You know? - I like this. It sounds so romantic.
I think I have a crush on this Seth too! <33333

2. I think I like Ananda. She has a cool name and she's witty too. And compassionate for wanting to tell the pale girl that it's okay. And I'm really glad that I was already finished eating my oatmeal when I read this! Haha. :)

3. I like the chapter title!
I’ve never really understood math to begin with, and throw in the alphabet and you get for a very confused Ry. - funny line :)
Barfing sucks major-league monkey butts. - yes, it does.

4. I love the conversation in his head. :)
“What’re you blowing chunks for?” Well, that was sensitive. - this had me laughing :))

5. When I was younger, say… [third grade]. I was the chubbiest girl in the whole [third grade] - same words too close together. Maybe the one in the second sentence should just be "grade."
I’m so glad you’re ali – awake - :)) funny nurse.

6. Woah, just by the first three lines, Owen's already got me really worried about him.
because I come [her] a lot - awkward typo.
And at the end, he's really, really got me worried. I think he could be my favorite character too. He's tied with Seth. Was Owen abused??

Ack! I would absolutely love to read more, but if I do, I might get addicted and I can't have that right now. I'm too busy with school. Perhaps after a few months. But I really do love this so far. You guys are doing an amazing job! :D

I'm not sure what to say, but it's a cute chapter!

I freaking love this story and seth oh brother he can totally get this ;) lol I love the fact tht hw teads seventeen nd consider it his world...soooo adorable. Nd Ananda's cat seems like fun :)

Poor Ryan! I feel ur pain to a certain extent....

Urg spiders are nasty!
Nice chapter you get to see a different perspective of her and her life, I like the cat and not the mom

Aw(: Sounds like my kitty

That chapter made me want Seth hugs even more!!! Espically cause I get the whole doll thing, which I realize is pathetic....

I'm so glad I found this story! I love the banner [is that what it's called..?] too. The characters are great and I have to say Ryan is my favourite so far! I haven't read all the chapters yet, but I'm planning on it after I've left you a waffling comment :) I will definitely be subscribing!

Just found this story and I love it! I want a Seth hug but I also want to give Owen a hug. Of course, I have a feeling he'd go berserk at physical contact, and if that's the case I'd like to give him a friendly smile and wave, at the least.

At any rate, love the story, and I think I might know what possibly could have happened to Owen. The only criticism I have is that seeing the same scene from each characters point of view is a little frustrating because the story takes 4 times as long to get anywhere. But at the same time it's so cool to see how differently the characters think. So I'm a bit lost as to whether I like the overlap or not, lol.

I love Ryan. SHe seem ssweet and he picturel looks like Taylor Jardine from We Are The In Crowd! :)

I absolutely adore the last owen chapter and I really can't waitg to find out why he wants to die and seth oh love him can't wait for him to kiss someone and maybe get some ass in the process ;) and last but not least pualie aka twinkle toes seem to have the hots for ms.anorexia is something going to happen between them hmmmm ?? Pleaseeeeee tell me me the suspense is killing me >×<

i agree with you that owen's chapters are pretty. i like his chapters and how he's not too focused on what's going on around him.

I think I love this story too much... Just saying

aww i love Paulie. and his seemingly small crush on Dessi.

Holy Crap, this story is absolutely adorable! I love Seth! But I love all of them really. The different pov's in stories really interests me, because you get more than just one side of the story. so an applause to you for expanding my horizon on stories. ive thought about it and used it before, but i dropped tht story long ago. well, i read from earlier posts and hope i get a Seth hug :)

you two are crazy updateers I LOVE IT

OH I'M DUTCH TOO! woopwoop! haha