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  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    ur dutch :O that is cool
    I am loving this story as well :)
    ah ha ... yeah don't ask me what the ah ha was about cause I couldn't tell you if I wanted to....
    I'm internally hyper... SORRY :P
    July 22nd, 2011 at 03:16am
  • I am your mother

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    I LOVE this.
    On a lot of stories, some characters get confusing and I'm so lost. But not with these characters! They're so developed and I just love them!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:53am
  • yellowlover777

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    Opps sorry that entered twice
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:53am
  • yellowlover777

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    I Love this story! I love Seth and Ryan!!! Please keep writting!!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:52am
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    I Love this story! I love Seth and Ryan!!! Please keep writting!!
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:52am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    If people don't have pony tails I hope they don't cut off body parts :O
    Anyway I really love this story, and this chapter is no exception to that :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 05:02pm
  • yarrow.

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    I loved this chapter! I hope Dessi and Ananda become friends :D
    July 20th, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    I almost didn't comment so I could get that random hilter stache anyway still need to organize the characters in my mind, but I really do love this :D
    July 20th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • yarrow.

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    Poor Seth ): But his chapters are always my favorite, so this makes me happy(:
    July 19th, 2011 at 09:07pm
  • DreamKiss

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    Seth seems like such a little cutie haha
    Owen's chapter was very poetic and realistic of a suicidal young man. Good job with that it's easy to make those type of things cliche. Props.
    July 19th, 2011 at 05:32am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    that just made me laugh, but seth chapters always make me laugh :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • k i w i

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    this is a really cool story! it reminds me of a movie called Lemonade Mouth on Disney Channel. it's actually a good movie too.
    i really like Paulie. a lot. he's my favorite character.
    i love conjoined stories like these! multiple authors are what's needed for a story like this because you have 6 different people and 6 different personalities to keep up with. you two are doing fantastic job of keeping each person's POV unique to the character and different from everyone else's.
    you two have different writing styles and they go together SO WELL! your different styles are what help make the personalities of everyone unique.
    i also like how you make every character seem important and that one person's struggles are just as difficult as another's.

    I really enjoyed reading this! keep it up! (}:
    July 19th, 2011 at 02:15am
  • yarrow.

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    Aww poor Owen. Wonder how he's going to end up in the story if he leaves...
    July 18th, 2011 at 10:03pm
  • bffead22

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    I absolutely love it. It is a very unique story; I don’t think I have read anything like it. Update soon? (:
    July 18th, 2011 at 06:42pm
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    OMA-DUB!!! no No NO THEY CANNOT HELP HIM WITH THAT!!! THAT JUST ISN'T COOL!!! (wow I should have used Caps Lock to type that...) anyway dude AH no NOT COOL! just so interesting!
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:31am
  • DreamKiss

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    Holy Meow.
    I dig Paulie. And Dessi reminds me of one of my best friends.
    Have I mentioned how much I love this story?
    Yeah...I have. Welll..
    Beautiful <3
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • southpaw

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    I got to the end of this and died on the inside when I found out there wasn't any more to read. D:
    This is seriously so unique. I've never read anything like this on Mibba (or anywhere, actually). All of the characters are so distinct and their narration is different. I also love how they have different dreams and goals, and how the met in the nurse's office is pretty gosh darn interesting too.
    I'm really looking forward to seeing how you continue this. You've got a wonderful cast of characters that is really set up for a great ~adventure. :D
    July 18th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • yarrow.

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    I love this! It's so good I would have commented without the Seth hugs held over our heads, but it's a wonderful bonus(:
    July 18th, 2011 at 02:41am
  • XxToRii_LUVxX

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    I love this story. Keep up the good work :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • DreamKiss

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    oooo is it a ghost? :O
    Curious...very curious.
    I love that you guys update like immediately. Seriously. The best <3 Can't wair for more!
    July 17th, 2011 at 06:54am