ur dutch :O that is cool I am loving this story as well :) ah ha ... yeah don't ask me what the ah ha was about cause I couldn't tell you if I wanted to.... I'm internally hyper... SORRY :P
I LOVE this. On a lot of stories, some characters get confusing and I'm so lost. But not with these characters! They're so developed and I just love them!
Seth seems like such a little cutie haha Owen's chapter was very poetic and realistic of a suicidal young man. Good job with that it's easy to make those type of things cliche. Props.
this is a really cool story! it reminds me of a movie called Lemonade Mouth on Disney Channel. it's actually a good movie too. i really like Paulie. a lot. he's my favorite character. i love conjoined stories like these! multiple authors are what's needed for a story like this because you have 6 different people and 6 different personalities to keep up with. you two are doing fantastic job of keeping each person's POV unique to the character and different from everyone else's. you two have different writing styles and they go together SO WELL! your different styles are what help make the personalities of everyone unique. i also like how you make every character seem important and that one person's struggles are just as difficult as another's.
OMA-DUB!!! no No NO THEY CANNOT HELP HIM WITH THAT!!! THAT JUST ISN'T COOL!!! (wow I should have used Caps Lock to type that...) anyway dude AH no NOT COOL! just so interesting!
Holy Meow. I dig Paulie. And Dessi reminds me of one of my best friends. Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Yeah...I have. Welll.. Beautiful <3
I got to the end of this and died on the inside when I found out there wasn't any more to read. D: This is seriously so unique. I've never read anything like this on Mibba (or anywhere, actually). All of the characters are so distinct and their narration is different. I also love how they have different dreams and goals, and how the met in the nurse's office is pretty gosh darn interesting too. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you continue this. You've got a wonderful cast of characters that is really set up for a great ~adventure. :D
I am loving this story as well :)
ah ha ... yeah don't ask me what the ah ha was about cause I couldn't tell you if I wanted to....
I'm internally hyper... SORRY :P