Shhh, Be Quiet You Might Piss Somebody Off. - Comments

  • kt_129

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    love this story i would vote for brian but maybe liz and brian fall in love and she is his sex slave for a week or two and then matt sees that thier happy and thinks why should he be in love (as matts first sex slave he was in love with killed herself) and takes liz away fron syn meaning a MAJOR LOVE TRIANGLE !!!!!! That would be AMAZING !!!!!! please update!!!!!! Mr. Green
    August 11th, 2014 at 10:51am
  • wildone101

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    Please update i luv it so much and i would vote for Brain <3
    August 30th, 2013 at 05:34am
  • Tamzi23

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    Update soon! I just found this story and loved it, so naturally I subscribed! I was going to give my vote for Brian, because I think if they opened up to each other, they could fall for each other. :D Mr. Green
    August 31st, 2012 at 05:31am
  • spidermanforever

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    My vote is for Brian because he seems to be the only one to control her and has his small moments for being nice to her. Love the story you have so far and look forward to another update XD
    August 14th, 2012 at 10:26am
  • Reckless;;

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    I love it. <3 This story is probably my favorite I've read so far. It's funny, dramatic, serious, and all around good. Update soon, please? (: I really can't wait to read more.
    July 10th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • Dizasterpiece

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    I hope you update this soon. Seriously you should continue with this. It's one of my favorites (:
    July 6th, 2012 at 06:56pm
  • Ilovea7x

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    please update!
    June 20th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • hip-to-be-square

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    This story is absolutely lovely, and I would love it if there would be another update soon :) That would be amazing.
    May 24th, 2012 at 01:55am
  • BloodyMassacre

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    I love this story! I hope you get up another chapter :)
    February 14th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • AkiVindex666

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    this is just pure awesome. love it and think you have a really good story here and think you should definitely take it further. and btw i think brian would be a good lover for her. from a psychological standing he would be the only one she would submit to and when she does she could see that nice side hidden somewhere kind of thing. and he would be the one who finally tames her. could go further into depth but im tired and cant be bothered XP
    December 26th, 2011 at 02:37pm
  • Lucyy Jayy

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    Can you update soon, I've been waiting for a while! Make Brian her love interest but Matt would be good as well. Please update soon!!
    December 22nd, 2011 at 01:18am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Hey this is a pretty cool story :) Cliche, maybe, but I like it anyway. There's something unique to it, and just the way you write.... It's very easy to read, for me anyway.
    I hope you are still writing this and plan on updating soon. I'm definitely subscribing and wanting more!
    I think her and Brian have a thing. I mean, the way he just controlled her... I think Matt will become more like Johnny, but a bit nicer, and probably Jimmy too, actually. Zacky could just be a friend. So definitely Brian :)
    So yes, please do keep on writing. There's something really good here :)
    PS. I do have a few of my own A7X slave stories, so yeah.... :)
    December 20th, 2011 at 10:59am
  • Ilovea7x

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    Brian!! and update soon, this wait is killing me
    December 5th, 2011 at 05:16am
  • Lunaalolitaa

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    Please oh please choose brian <3 it could be so hot because he's rough but nice to her x3 rough sex lulwut.
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    I love this so much! I vote for Syn though, maybe they'd go all S & M or some shit =D
    October 13th, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • My Guardian Angel

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    This story is pretty effing epic: Keep updating :D
    October 10th, 2011 at 10:58pm
  • madi220

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    Hmmmmm.....I guess either Brian or Zacky.......But awesome story PLEASE write more soon
    September 20th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • ImaginationOnAPlate

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    I chose... Brian. Maybe Matt. But Zacky and Liz need to end up as best friends. And Brian would be good since she listens to him. Matt could be okay though. I don't know. Too hard. But I like the story mucho and you should update everyday. Or at least really often. Or something.
    September 11th, 2011 at 08:33pm
  • vanessarsc

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    I love this story!! and I think I'm going to chose Brian
    August 31st, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • shelbie.marie

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    i am increditably in love with the story, like i love and im straving for more. oh and i love matt soo(:
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:13pm