Shhh, Be Quiet You Might Piss Somebody Off. - Comments

I loved this chapter!!! Ohhh spanking!! I never see that!! Its not used enough in my opinion :P And as for love interest... I so badly want to say Matt cuz he's my fav and I always pick him but.... after that last chapter... Brian just seems so perfect for her.... And especially since he's the one who wanted her from the beginning... So for the first time in my life.... I think Im actually going to say Brian.

I Think She Shouldn't Like Any Of Them. She Should Hate Them All, And Have Them All Like Her. That Would Make It More Interesting!!!

I think it should be Brian :) because of how mean he is, then he could get a little nicer :)
But I think Matt and Zacky should have a 'thing' for her ;) just to add a twist!
Plus, jealous is always hot. ^^

YAY! MORE MORE!

yay you updated!!!

I think I would love to see her with Brian, even though I know it's horrible n reality, in stories like these, I love reading about the love interest being able to snap any second. I think it makes it more interesting. I LOVE YOUR STORY BTW!

i wanna say brian. just because a very dominant man, is hot. and i really like this chapter.

I've been reading this..and not commented? WTF is wrong with me? I have to say I love it..I always love the strong-willed character...I would love to choose but it's the thing with her brother that's got me curious...I don't cause I feel like she's used t oit cause of her brother...and well damn I can't choose Johnny that would've played out funny. And I don't wanna disturb a Johnny and Jimmy thing then...well I have to say Matt is overused...so either Zacky or Brian.

This story is great lol Liz is a bamf for being able to stay down there for so long. For who the main guy I have to say Brian, it would be interesting to see that play out.

This is amazing so far. I just love how fiery she is. And if she were to be with a guy, I'd like to see her be with Brian. Especially after that last chapter.

Usually I'm a Matt girl, but I think Brian would be perfect.

I love this story, and Liz is the shit. I have been laughing my ass off at her comments to the boys. Jommy is adorable(: '

I've decided that one of the guys should like... kidnap her brother and let her torture him. Cause, I got the feeling that he raped her. Maybe that's just me... Also, Liz needs to kick another slaves ass!

Dude, these guys are harsh. I mean, TWO WEEKS?!?! What douchebags, lol. So for the love interest I'm definitely thinking Brian because maybe there's another side of him that's not so cruel. Idk, just a though. Anyway, this story is Ah-maz-ing so far, you just need to update faster!!!

bahahaha.
aaahhh, the whole part where she was choking Johnny again was so funny, I couldn't help but laugh (even though Johnny's so adorable!).
I didn't think they woud literally sew her mouth shut but...wow.
I giggled at him making his smile fall slightly in confusion. “Nice grills. G thug.”
lol, that was the best part.
I'm pretty sure that she's going to last long but not too long. Know what I mean? If she's fin in the dark, she'll die of starvation...cuz her lips are sewn shut.
ANYWAY...update, please? c:

i really like this story! please post fast i love this story so much!

I really like this story. I didn't think they'd actually sew her mouth shut! I mean I knew it was coming.. but it still shocked me. Keep up the good work, as in post faster! Oh and she's tots going to have a thing with Ven... or perhaps Shads right? Gah. hurry up!

More please :}

I'm in love with her attitude - reminds me of how I am sometimes .. lol.

I love this story so far :D

I fucking love this story already! I hope she doesn't end up gettin her lips sewn shut, but knowing her and her attitude (which I love btw) she most likely will. Update soon, por favor.

COMMENT VIRGINITY *evil cackle*

: D First off, i really like it :) I think it has potential and could really go some where. Introducing her to them was a great way to relate the characters though I do have an issue with the twin.
We get that he has a problem with her wearing revealing clothing but when you pretty much say they fucked i was like Oh, what? I think that it's fine you did it that way but if he won't be coming into the story later you shouldn't have introduced the whole incestuous thing, unless i of course just have a sick mind, which is entirely possible!

Update soon!