The Vanity Effect - Comments

Omg you need to stop having a life outside writing this for us readers hahahahaha totally kidding.. but seriously.

the AN hahahaha i miss vine man.
you suck for cliffhangers!!!!!!!

i snorted at your note lolol
this was a really good chapter holy

Keeps getting better by the chapter.

oh damn!! That escalated!! Stupid Jamie needs to learn to shut his damned mouth!
I cannot wait to see what the gift is!! My damned curiosity hasn't been able to forget it :P

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thank you all so much for reading my words, i appreciate y'all so much. you have no idea!!

@ electrovoid
yay! i'm sooo glad lmao. i was worried y'all would see this coming and see right through jamie from the start

Yoooo did NOT expect that!!!

Oh I would have decked him in the eye from the time he grabbed my ass. Just because we are dancing doesn't mean you have free range of my body. Hopefully Samuel sees her running to him as a sign that she didn't want to do it. I really wish her brain Would have connected earlier but I understand sometimes you can be frozen in fear

Ok, my like of Jamie flew out the window...
That was not good potstirring :(
Can't wait to see how Sam reacts! Will he believe her?

Omg need an update now please!!!!!!!

ajhhhh why cut it there
i still love this so freaking much!!!!

Oh God!
Please please please do not wait a month to update!
I dont think I could wait that long go find out!

I like Jamie already. I like a bit of pot-stirring!!
Can't wait to see where this leads - if she will realise she is over Sam, or if it will just eat her insides with guilt.

OK, so I spend the last two days reading this. No regrets!!
This story is awesome!

Just read all the chapters in 2 days. I'm hooked. Hope there's an update soon!

Literally just read this from start to finish over the last week or so and I am so guttered that I have to wait for updates now hahaha

@ jamila1990
I've read and reread this comment and the one you left a couple of weeks ago and I must say I totally agree lol. It's pretty evident throughout this story that both Evan and Samuel have emotional baggage and unhealthy tendencies, which is part of why they seem to be so drawn to each other. Growing up, they've both felt like they were void of something because neither of them were raised in a home that was whole. They definitely need to work through their baggage and saying "sorry" couldn't possibly ever be enough.

Another thing I must point out about these characters is that, yes, they are both crazy about each other and erratic in their behavior, however, you also have to consider that they're teenagers. Everything about being a teen feels so dramatic and high-stakes because of the raging hormones and that awkward bridge between no longer being a kid but also not quite yet an adult --- which is why Evan and Sam's relationship is such a damn roller coaster.

They're just two melodramatic teenagers who are in love and have no idea how to handle it

Thank you so much for your consistent comments and feedback, it means so much to me!!!

yeah, I still think they both need therapy because she's using her anxiety and horniness to pretty much fuck whenever she wants, and he's using that to his advantage to pretty much do what he wants with her without really thinking about it. I'm probably the only one in the minority here that doesn't think they should get back together without having a serious talk because in the long run, the other person will just feel like they're being used. Sorry doesn't fix everything, and instead of just apologizing, maybe they should talk and understand why certain things that the other person is or is not doing is important to them

sometimes the best kind of sex is the kind of sex you know you shouldn’t be doing while doing it— aka this chapter lol