The Vanity Effect - Comments

I'm starting to think she should see an counselor. It doesn't seem like she has a healthy connection with him, even if they end up together

Congrats on your promotion! I enjoyed this update and look forward to the next one.

yay, you're back after 3 months

Evan girl give up the fight man we all know you miss him I mean hello you sent him three text messages and a phone call in one day of him giving you space that you wanted btw and now you want him back girl stop fronting and be his girlfriend again, he lied and made a mistake get over it, I mean you still haven’t told him about his mom threatening you still so who’s the liar now, just get back what th him Evan you are exhausting me #Team Samuel

Woo! Team Sam! She needs to make up her mind. I know Sam wants to stay with her but giving her the space she thinks she needs is so much better. Its either together or nothing Evan.

I love this story but I feel like they're fighting is kind of prolonged. I feel like if she wants to be done with him she needs to be done with him it's kind of stupid of her to just keep trying to push friendship when obviously he just said he doesn't want friendship.

I agree with merero, you can tie everything together in at least 10-15 chapters but obviously making Sam and Evan get back together happily and more trustworthy and communicative.....I think that's the real problem with them is that

i don't want this to end, but i feel like you could tie everything up in no more than 15 chapters- i was thinking 10

I'm glad things worked out with your computer! I've had that happen before and it's awful!

I still think there are some holes. But, I hope Sam and Evan make up. Happy endings are nice.

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Thanks for reading! I seriously appreciate your staying support for my story!

And thank you so much, I'll be okay.

I almost forgot about it...glad about the update, so no meeting future bother-in-law during christmas

I was so happy to see this update. I liked this chapter a lot, and I hope it's leading to some resolution between Samuel and Evan.

Wow I almost forgot about this story. I'm really glad that Liza made up with her! It's what she really needed especially with everything going on right now. Maybe Evan does need to go to weigh to realize that she should just be with him and stop running circles like he said. So much has happened in 4 days I can't believe it's only been that amount of time.
I hope whatever health issue your having gets better

This book is pretty amazing!

wow! thats awesome! fuck off adam, please update!!!!

Oh boy that's gonna kick Samuel right in the gut. Now his father is gonna try to lead some perfect life and force Samuel into the charade. So his younger son doesnt have to know that his father is a shit head. I'm totally cheering Evan on right now! This is one of the few chapters she's actually not selfish and loved that she put Adam in his place. I'm disappointed in Liza that she let Adam in and let the charade go on so long. She knows the pain sam went through, she should have been like tell him what you wanna say and let him decide...not cook together and try to carry on a b.s. conversation

your life is sounding like mine. I'm trying to quit my job, use this free vacation I have, and move, but i have months before I have to do it. Love the drama in the story tho :)

LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

Oh boy! Who let him in the house?!

oooooooo dun dun dun