I Fell Apart - Comments

Oh, god this story is a masterpiece! Please please try to update because I really can't wait. I love the plot, and the whole war between the Leto brothers and that love triangle that starts to form<3 genius! And you really have a way with words, which makes this story even more enjoyable to read. Pleaseeeee update?

PS: I knew Mr. Leto was Shannon :D I could feel it.

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EF OMFFFFFG THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!! I'M SO GLAD YOU CREATED A NEW CHAPTER! HOPEFULLY THERE WILL BE MORE TO COME :)

You're back. I've been waiting for this update for forever and I loved it. Oh, Jared is a little evil, me likey.
And Shannon, 'nuff said.
I can't wait to see where this is all going.

Back?!?! I sure hope so! :)

Just got to this side and this was the first story I've been reading.. And I fell in love with it. I love your way of writing, the way you express yourself, the way you describe.
First I thought Mr. Leto was Jared, I admit, but I'm happy it's Shannon :D I love Jared as the bad boy (he seems like that 'till now, I dunno what it will be when the story goes on;)) and Tomo as Shannon's 'maid' xD
Hope you come to update soon, I know the feeling when school is distracting you from writing...

Ohh please update more. You are such a good writer. Please more of Jared

I love this, please update soon. ^_^
*subscribes*

So when I realized it was the end of the chapter I literally went "ah dammit" outloud lol just discovered it and already love it. You included vampires which I'm obsessed about, way before the world became obsessed with them actually, they just interest me so much. Plus this is the first story I read with 30STM..... Anyways. Love it. More please!! :)

this story is amazing!!!!!

i am so in love with this story i really want to know how this all plays out ^_^

oh I love this!! Please oh please update soon!!!!

Just subscribed, i freaking love 30 seconds to mars!