I Don't Love You Like I Did Yesterday - Comments

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Alright so as I suspected, this was a sequel haha
That explains why I had nooooo clue what was going on for a while, but overall I think it was a good story.

As far as criticism goes, there were a few grammar things, but we all have them so I don't think that's such a huge deal. Also, if you do another sequel for whatever reason, I might suggest kind of recapping on the plot, you know? Like how everyone knows the story of Harry Potter, but in every book, J.K. Rowling still fills you in on what's happened up to that point, reiterates the plot, and sort of reintroduces the characters.

I'm not trying to bring you down though! You're a good writer! So keep writing! <3

Aggghhhhhhhh Perfect ending! I totally teared up!

Cuuuuuuttteeeeee :D

The fuck.... Why is kristy being nice to michelle..

OH MY GOD. YOU UPDATED. OH MY GOD. THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING. I FUCKING LOVE KOTA. BUT OH MY GOD. WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON WITH KRISTY BEING NICE? AND OH MY FUCKING GOD. DID I MISS SOMETHING? SINCE WHEN IS KOTA FUCKING PREGGERS?

I WANT DAKOTA TO BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF MICHELLE! AND SHES MY CHARACTER SO! THAT MEANS YOU HAVE TO! lololol :D I was at your house last night so I dont know how you managed not to tell me that you updated.

Hullo ^.^ I just wanted to say that I love what you've got going on here, and I think you should continue, but just a little slower. It's kinda like you've got this part planned out and you just really want to get there without paying to much attention to the earlier chapters. And the purple text on a black background kind of strains your eyes after a few chapters, so maybe you should try a lighter color on a dark background or a darker color on a light background, instead of a neon-ish color on a black background. I can't really explain it lol

I have been brought here via comment swap. :)

This is a pretty well written story, but it seems a little fast. Don't be hesitant to write it out because it'll be longer. It's good, so keep going. :) Just try to slow it down a little. :)

I have been brought here via comment swap. :)

This is a pretty well written story, but it seems a little fast. Don't be hesitant to write it out because it'll be longer. It's good, so keep going. :) Just try to slow it down a little. :)

Hey, I think you should create a simpler layout that actually coincides with the story. I was really confused by the layout you have now.

Also, this story moves a little too fast for my liking. Maybe you could try to slow it down and add in some more detail. The quick pace kind of confuses me.

There isn't much to say about this story. It's a good start!! It could be great if you spend a little time fixing it up.

(:

Not sure what's going on, but I like it. It seems really mysterious to me, since I have no clue who the characters are. I got this story on Comment Swap, so yeah, haven't seen the prequel. Although, I like how the story flows very well together. It's not very rushed, it goes at a good pace.

Keep up the good work!

MEEEEEHHHHHHH MOOOOOORRRREEEE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!

I love the changes :D

Love the new update. Umm their gonna have babies ?

Love the new update. Aww only 2 more chapters until then end

Fucking Trent... Grrrr

YAY!!!!! Sequel!!!!!!!!

<3333 Up-date again soon!! Can't wait to see read the sequel!! =D

Love the new update. Although I wanted to listen to leana naughty talk lol

I'm all smiley nao :D <3<3<3 ZACKY AND KOTA FOREVER!