Simple Kind of Life - Comments

Loved the long update. Not sure how I feel about James possibly coming back into the picture. There is more to what happend between James and Avery. I really like this story; I like how you are mking Jeff more respectable and not some horn doggy! Ha! Ha! Can't wait to read what you have planned.

loved the update! i thought jeff was going to start getting ready to break up with her, but instead he made more plans to hang out! i'm sure there will be some james drama in the next chapter as well....can't wait to read more!

AWESOME chapter

Oh my gosh Zac and the kissy face fhykiyhfguc. All I can see in my head is him doing that during the one game. Fantastic chapter!

great chapter

So good! Jeff being there was a surprise, but a very welcome one. I love Lili, she's adorable! What crawled into Aaron's bottom? Seriously? And Avery, oh Avery, I love her so. Keep up the good work :-)

Great update! I'm really looking forward to reading how Jeff and Avery's relationship pans out!!

So happy they met up again.

So this was probably my favorite chapter so far. I loved it! I really didn't expect Jeff to just show up like that, but I'm glad he did, I love that he's starting to develop a bit of a bond with Lilly. Jeff is not ready to admit it to himself but I think he's starting to develop some feelings for Avery, not to mention that he's more lonely than he lets on. I loved the part with Angie, she's so cool, and it's great that she gave Jeff Avery's address, Angie is seriously my favorite supporting character ever! I can't wait to see where you take this next, great update hon!

I'm kind of surprised they were reunited so soon! I want to know about Lili's dad...and I want to see what happens with Avery and Jeff! Also, I love that she calls Lili "Squeaks." so cute. :)

I was so hopping you'd update! I love it! Lili makes me laugh. More please?

Of course I watched the domination, lol. Love Angie, my fav character. I knew he'd be back. Poor Jeff, lonely w/o his homeboy Richie.

Oh Jeff was so sweet; Glad you made him be more caring than just a man whore. Great update.

I really liked this! I'm glad Lili's finally warming up to Jeff, and I'm sad that their summer is ending. Then again, knowing you, this won't be the end for them. THAT'S A GOOD THING :P. Great chapter; I really enjoyed it.

That was so cute! I loved how patient he was with Lili <3

i know they'll see more of each other....can't wait to see how! :)

He was good with Lili. Love it. U know he is gonna be calling her. I give him a month b4 he breaks down, lol..... ANd I love Cabbie :)

Awww, Jeff and Lili were SO cute!! I had the biggest grin on my face when he took her out for a ride. And he was so good with Aaron too! I can't wait to see what happens between Avery and Jeff now that summer is over. Great writing, as usual!!

I really hope he overlooks her baggage and then falls in love with her. MUA HAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm evil, I know. But I love it :) Great job, and I can't wait to read more about Jeff and Avery's adventures :P

GAH I can't believe she actually did it. I'm so proud of her. She grew some lady balls and told him what she wanted. I really like that she took the first step since he obviously wasn't going to do it. But i'm kind of curious to see how things work because i don't want her to get attatched and get hurt. I'm really curious to see how the situation after summer handles because he's in philly and she's from where?
Confussion in sarah's face. gah i'm so lost. but anyhow i can't wait for more this just made my night.