Simple Kind of Life - Comments

“Yeah, she was kind of intimidating.” Bahaha I lover Cartsy. Might be my fav line ever. I love how she finally realizes she can have just fun and omg Angela with the fucking ginger. Almost spit my drink out. Love it :) U are the best.

Great update hon! I really liked the way Avery handled things, at first I thought she was going to stay far away from Jeff but it's great that she gave him another chance, even if it's just for some fun. And I loved Jeff in this chapter, he at least felt bad for what he did and admitted he'd been a jerk, and it's really good to see that Avery is really making an impression on him. And of course I really enjoyed the part with Angie, that character is so much fun, and she slept with Claude!
Great as always, can't wait for next part!

Great chapter! I love how shocked he seemed to be about the idea of he wanting to just sleep around with him, no strings attached. Can't wait for more :)

yes i'm so proud of avery for telling him she wanted a fling! i can't wait for her to get some action!

I love it!!! Angie cracks me up

Update soon please!! I need to know what happens!

I was really impressed with Jeff, but then he had to go and bail when he realized Lili is her daughter. But it's understandable, no guy his age is dying to date a woman with kids. I wonder how Avery is going to react to that, I have the feeling she was ready to give Jeff a chance after how well he handle what happened with Aaron, but I think Mr. Carter just ruined that. I can't wait to see what happens next! I seriously love this story, it just keeps getting better ;)

My goodness, I should really check my emails more often. Wonderful chapter girlie. I think it is very realistic for Jeff to bail when he seen she had a young daughter. He's an idiot :) but we love him. And how freaking cute about the hangover food. Lovable, idiotic and a total man. i love jeff

can't wait to find out what's happening next! :)

This is a wonderful little story! How did I not see it before. You seem to have a solid plot going on, and some really great writing. I`m totally subscribing, and I cannot wait for the next update. Great job!

Great update. Jeff may regret leaving.

Gah i love it. I can't believe he ran at the thought of her having a kid. If she's chill why can't he just be chill. Sheesh. What i want to know is how does Ave's friend come into this. Cause i know that she was.... I really hope that her and Jeff start hanging out a bit more, although i love their sexual tension right now.

bad move on Jeff part but dont expect anything else... great update..

if everything goes as planed I hope to have an update tonight. the sinus infection that lasted two weeked derailed my plans

Love this story! Can't wait for an update

*subscribes*

Great update hon! I'm really enjoying the way you write Jeff, he's a bit awkward around Avery, probably because she's not his usual type of woman. I like what you're doing with Avery, in terms of character development, I like dynamics in her relationships with the people around her. And as always, I loved Angie, she's really good at making Avery relax and her lines are just so funny! I hope you won't keep us waiting too long, I want to know who she saw... can't wait for the next part!

<3 I had a fit when you said Jeff was Canadian! I actually googled it to make sure you were telling the truth ;o Seriously though, I never knew that. I think Avery either saw James over at her house, or her brother is having sex ;P Anyways, that was an awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one. I'm glad Avery apologized to Jeff, too

okay so avery definitely saw her brother at the party...i can't wait for jeff and avery to start becoming friends :)

YAYAYAYAY just made my day. i was so happy to see this. I love ave and how everything is just so cut and dry with her there is no room for difference. I really hope that she can just be chill around jeff. that would be amazing but she won't cause she's a control freak (kinda like that about her). I swear if she sees either her ex or her little brother i might shit a brick.

Hope you update soon, I really want to know who she sees in the house. Another great update!

I think it's her brother(: good update i enjoyed it!