The Vampire's Promise - Comments

Okay so I've read the first chapter and I have a few flaws that I have found. The layout is odd, it doesn't match with the context and could really be changed to save loosing readers. Not to mention you could also do with some more detail in your characters without making us go straight to the Character page, it takes time and if we forget we have to go back. I also suggest you delete the 'prequel' it makes no sense and is a waste of material.

Awesome chapter updates. :)

Oh, this story isn't boring.!

It's actually one of my personal favorites. :)

I liked this chapter; keep up the awesome work.! :D

Wow! I love that you are spitting out chapters to the story like they are nothing haha "D

Oh My, chapter 8 was quite lovely. :D

Good job. :D

I've found my new favorite story.

Lovely update doll-face. :)

@ Jamie :3
Hehe, well I'm glad you're excited! I'm actually getting more into it as I write, so I'm getting a bit excited too. XD Thank you!

I really like this story so far.!

I'm excited to see where this will go.

Good job, doll-face. :)

I can see it finally without difficulty!!!!! "D

@ Draw 1
Aw man. :( Maybe if I remove the layout, it'll fix itself.

@ FullMoon2012
No, not really

@ Draw 1
Is it fixed now, though? O:

@ FullMoon2012
Okay :D, thanks, i guess mibba just screwed up a when I was reading it haha!

@ Draw 1
Um actually, I changed the layout entirely ||D If it doesn't have the little cloud to the bottom right, then Mibba screwed up. Anyway, with the new layout, you should be able to read it just fine- the background is a white color, while the writing is sort of gray.

I really enjoyed reading the prologue Blue!!!! Though the words were a bit hard to see. Would you consider changing the color to a more bold print. For everyones' eye's sake "D