Why am I so disappointed with Sidney? He really didnt do anything wrong, but I feel like he cheated on Emily. I cant help but think that Emily will be hurt by him sleeping with Sarah.
Maybe all of this is leading Sidney back to Emily - making him realize what he really wants.
OK so I know that I am finding this story a little late, but that doesnt mean that it doesnt deserve comments!! Love this story so far, great set up! Cant wait to see where this is going!!
Eeeeepppp!! THEY KISSED?!?!?! Are they going to be together now? Is she going to stay? Why do I suddenly feel like that weird voice that asks questions like this on the soap operas?.............AWKWARD
This chapter really illustrates how this story is different from most I read. It is all about the depth of feelings between Sidney and Emily. Dont get me wrong, I love a bit of smut as much as the next person, but this story shows that there is much more to a relationship than hopping into bed and having mind-blowing sex. Both Emily and Sidney are trying to figure out who they are and where they want to go. Sidney's life is a little more mapped out than Emily's, but both are trying to reconcile the kids they were to the adults they have become. And how their relationship fits into all of this. You do a great job in portraying that to your readers! Your consistent updates keep us all comming back for more! Keep up the great work.
I like what you did with this chapter. It would have been too easy - and reckless- if Emily had blurted out that she wanted to stay with Sidney. Even though they both want it, it is a decision that should be well thought out - not a decision made after one night of passion.
There are a lot of hurdles that they will have to overcome - but hoepfully they can talk things out and make them work.
I just started this today and I couldn't stop reading it! I really hope that Emily stays in Pittsburgh and her and Sid stick together. Keep up the fantastic work!!!
Maybe all of this is leading Sidney back to Emily - making him realize what he really wants.