July 22nd, 2011 at 08:11pm
You cannot imagine how long I've been looking for another great author out here on mibba. I am so glad I found this story because, really, it is truly well-written.
So far, I think that your story is turning out to be pretty amazing. The pace isn't fast, but it isn't too slow either. I find that a lot of stories here fail to take their time with their plots, but your story is definitely not doing that. Also, there's just something I like about how you've built your characters. I can't really pin point it, but, for me, there's something about them that makes the plot seem more exciting–that makes the story around them more interesting. So, definitely keep up the great work!
I'm really looking forward to seeing how this story goes!
I like how Emily is bringing out the ``fun`` side of Sid - but it seems that you are hinting there is more than friendship between these two. I hope so
I look forward to the next update