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  • celestial_royalty

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    My favorite line: I gawked at her. My lord I haven’t been here for a week and she’s gonna start pimping me out? 3- You mean "bridal style". A bridle is something one puts on a horse, and I don't think Jake pulled out the leather ropes just yet. Paul's cute, the story was fuzzy. Maybe a bit too much so. You may want to revise for spelling errors. Dan's cute, although he could have been a little more developed.
    October 21st, 2012 at 05:52am
  • EmKay

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    @ Trig-ger
    thanks! :D
    August 20th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    August 20th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • Bamboo33010

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    AW! This was such a great story! Great job! <3
    November 26th, 2011 at 10:15am
  • shadow123

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    omg! nooo they shouldn't have let her go lol :P good shes okay :) awe jakey is heartbroken :P update i love this story <3
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:34pm
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    i love this story :) haha jake has something on his mind :P
    July 25th, 2011 at 02:44pm
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