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  • DanniiDisasterr

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    Can I get another chapter tomorrow ? (: this is great babydoll
    September 1st, 2011 at 04:18am
  • imperfecktion

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    Well that was blunt, but at least he finally said it :) I dunno what's gonna happen next but I bet Brenton's gonna have to deal with one of his fuck buddies before he talks to Destiny again.
    August 31st, 2011 at 09:18am
  • DanniiDisasterr

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    Oh shitt. What is Destiny gonna say??? Lovee itt!
    August 31st, 2011 at 06:20am
  • kiikyta

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    I love this last two chapters!<3
    August 31st, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Shadow1990

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    I'M HATING THE TORTURE HERE!!!! Awsome chapter....loved it.
    Oh and I'm gonna seriously DIE if you don't update soon (just thought I'd let you know)
    August 31st, 2011 at 02:44am
  • TheKimba96

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    Love it update plzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 30th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • imperfecktion

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    I'm liking the switching p.o.v.'s.
    August 30th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • DanniiDisasterr

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    I definatly love thiss (: its amazing. Can't wait for the nextt chapterr (: update asap <3
    August 30th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • A.U.T.O.M.A.T.I.C

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    I really love this story so far! Can't wait for tue next update. P.S Brenton has too many hoes, I think they're gonna do something to him one day.
    August 30th, 2011 at 04:11am
  • Billie Holiday

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    Before I read, I would just like to say the color of the words makes it a bit hard to read since they runoff the side of the page. Though maybe if you justified or centered them, it would work? Just a suggestion.
    August 30th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • Dreamwriter

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    Well I think she should have fun at this party! Perhaps make Brenton jealous :) Thanks for the update!
    August 30th, 2011 at 01:24am
  • DanniiDisasterr

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    Love thiss (:
    August 29th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • Shadow1990

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    I liked the beginning of the chapter. I like the Destiney/Brenton moments....but I wish he'd just spit it out that he loves her for real (without being drunk). Brenton frustrates me but he's still such an awsome character
    August 29th, 2011 at 02:09am
  • DanniiDisasterr

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    I like what I've read of the first chapter, but I can't read itt. The red clashes with the fire in Love.../:
    August 28th, 2011 at 11:13pm
  • laskater87

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    great update. i like the way u are making him and destiny closer, but slowly. great story!!!!!!!!!!!
    August 27th, 2011 at 08:08pm
  • Aria Williams

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    this is amazing!!!!!! kmu
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • kiikyta

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    xD love it!
    Favorite part him thinking of Destiny while having sex with his girlfriend!
    August 26th, 2011 at 09:12pm
  • Shadow1990

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    Good chapter! I loved it. Next plz :D
    August 26th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • TheKimba96

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    More plz! lol
    August 24th, 2011 at 05:16pm
  • imperfecktion

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    It was good :) Damn he got so drunk. Drunken people speak the truth.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:20am
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