Not Everything Is What It Seems - Comments

@ mcrzluver
yeeey thank you so much :) hope you like it!!!

Awesome! I'll definitely read the sequel!

@ mcrzluver
if you happen to read the sequel to this story, it should be better written :) The sequel is on hiatus but I'm planning on continuing the story soon and taking it off hiatus

Ok :)

@ mcrzluver
ohhh mannn the errors I knooow! you have to forgive me, it was my first story ever and I sucked ahaha I know that! I promise I'm much better ahah
but thank you anyway! :p I'm glad the story is still good even with those awful grammar mistakes! I'm well aware of them

I love this story so much. The only problem with it is there are a lot of grammar errors. In some parts it doesn't quite make sense due to the errors. Other than that great job.

Got through the rest of the story and I'm so sad that one of the babies didn't make it. I'm glad that Annie's OK and I hope the other baby pulls through. I can't imagine what either one of them are going through and I hope Brian doesn't hit rock bottom again when Annie needs him the most. Thanks for posting this story! I hope to get to the sequel sometime soon!

Just finished chapter 36! I'm soooo glad that Brian and Annie finally made love! There was just toooo much sexual tension between them and they needed some relief!

I'm so glad that they made up with each other too after Brian was being so distant. I understand he was busy but poor Annie just needed to know that he was still there!

On to keep reading! I love this story! I can't wait to finish it so I can get to the sequel!!

OK, so I'm up to chapter 17:

First of all, I love how this story keeps you guessing. Every time you think you figured out who cares about who it changes, and that's good because it piques my interest.

I can't help feeling like even though she and Matt confessed to each other that they care about each other that something is going to go wrong. I really wish that she would see that Brian is right there in front of her all of this time and he seems like he genuinely cares about her and wants her to be happy no matter what.

Matt needs to man up and tell her that he almost kissed Emma! Every day that passes is just going to make it harder on her when she finds out.

I love the whole plot/storyline etc. This story keeps me interested and I can't wait to read some more!

wow i really loved this story and i can't wait for the sequel, even though the ending of this one was really sad. :(

oh my god woman you made me cry :-(
I hope she doesn't pull away from everyone now and I'm looking forward to reading the sequel to find out what happens

-crying

<3 I'm in love with this story… :D. It just doesn't get old. Have you any idea how it's going to end yet? Wait no, I don't want to know. I want it to be a surprise! Keep up the delicious writing.
-Michelle

Love it:D Thank you for update and i hope 'the changes' won't be bad for them:)

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more soooon !!1

O.o woah!! Hope you update soons!!!

Hey, hope you are fine. What about an update? Still love your story. :)

I love this story :D
It seems so familiar, have you posted it on Wattpad or Fanfiction or anything? because i think i have read it on a different website :L
Anyway i love it! XD

Wow, seriously I love your story, even if i'm french, i'm reading this (Welcome in my life translator ♪). I check many times everyday if there are a new chapter. I love it. Continue like that ! :D