I think he just fainted.. He is allergic or something. I think something have to happen to make your fanfic even more interesting. Is just my humble opinion. :/ or is just me that life gets me bored every single day. :s something like that. you said you want opinions so I give you mine. anyway... It's still great. everything involving Brian is fkng great! ha. have fun. :) keep going. :D
I love Brian eyes so bad! everytime Annie says she looks into Bri's eyes I can see those eyes..Those ayes melt my heart! hahaa!! Iam at Brian's POV. XD
Poor Annie. I really can relate to this chapter because my parents are the same way. If a guy has a tattoo, piercing, or wears eyeliner, they are devil worship an they're going to hell. It makes me ao mad but I loved the chapter. :)
Hello!! XD. i love McKenna having a crush on Matt, super cute! ahaha.. And I knew Papa Gates was only joking.. :) what a lame comment. :/ i was reading and thinking like "about this i have to comment" but then i finished reading and forgot what i had to say. :| sorry. :/ just keep going.. your story is great- and please uptade soon. :d have fun girl. ^^