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  • MCRLUCY

    MCRLUCY (100)

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    Wow. You've packed so much into these first two chapters, so if the rest is as beautifully written as this, then you're cooking with gas mate.

    I read this and felt exactly what your character is feeling; indescribable loss. It's so sorrowful but amazing at the same time. It's so simple, but epic at the same time too.

    Please carry on with this. I'm sure everyone's suffered terrible loss at some point in their lives and you seem to have hit the nail on the head with this. Carry on writing this; it's inspirational!
    February 26th, 2008 at 04:53pm
  • A Herd of Ducklings?

    A Herd of Ducklings? (100)

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    It's so good! Sad, but true. I love it.
    February 26th, 2008 at 12:45am
  • BabyBunny

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    It's great how you can make it half poem.
    It's heartbreaking.
    February 24th, 2008 at 07:33pm
  • Save My Soul

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    Wow this is amazing.
    I can't wait for more!
    You've got talent love!
    February 23rd, 2008 at 10:46pm
  • A Herd of Ducklings?

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    Hi!
    I like this story so far. I know it's just the beginning, but it's good!
    I look forward to reading more, that is, if you decide to post more!
    DJ
    February 23rd, 2008 at 10:38pm
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