Not Meant. - Comments

  • JeeniferKaay

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    NOOOOOOOOO! Ugh. The ending disappointed me SO much!
    I don't like Jase. -___-
    I wanted her and Luke to be together.../:
    But whatever.
    This was an amazing story.
    January 28th, 2012 at 01:45am
  • brookelovesyou

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    I hope there is going to be a sequal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:47pm
  • brookelovesyou

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    I LOVE THIS STORY..... IM KINDA SAD THAT IT ENED AND THAT LUKE TURNED OUT TO BE DATING A GUY..... I THOUGHT KAILEY AND LUKE MADE A CUTE COUPLE BUT SHE WILL ALWAYS LOVE JASE :(
    November 23rd, 2011 at 09:47pm
  • ericafbabyy

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    great way to end it from like the beginning! iHonestly didn't see that one coming but it worked! he ifnally told her he loved her! (: lmfao. ohmygod....is there gonna be a part 2? Well, iThinkk this whole story is gonna repeat in some type of way...have two more kids lol.
    November 22nd, 2011 at 05:54pm
  • RememberWhen;

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    I've just started reading this, i'm on chapter 20, and i will read more tomorrow, as it is 1 am where i live. But so far it is a great story! <3 x
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:34pm
  • colddarkheart

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    I'm foreseeing a sequel... :) Please! I love it so much and I really don't want Kailey back with Jase... :(
    November 21st, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • ZombieToast

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    HOLY SHOES!!

    Loved it
    November 20th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • ZombieToast

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    I LOVE YOU JASEEE!!!!
    November 17th, 2011 at 09:21pm
  • ZombieToast

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    I....I love you luke
    November 16th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • ZombieToast

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    THEIR SO FREAKIN CUTE 2 GETHER!!!!
    November 15th, 2011 at 01:59am
  • JetBlackSwanTheory

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    hey I really like the way you right, it's really engrossing. any chance you could have a look at mine give me some advice...be really appreciated =]
    November 14th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • ZombieToast

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    I LOVE THIS STOOOORY!!

    LLLLuceyyyyy (: ....
    I think so
    November 1st, 2011 at 04:51pm
  • Darkness-Surrounding

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    I love this story.
    I love Lucey relationship (Luke and Casey)
    I don't like Jacey's cuz Jase is an ASSHOLE!!! (Jase and Casey)
    October 29th, 2011 at 06:02pm
  • misslilshorty

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    ugh, they should just break up already. it's like reading sammi and Ron. The kept fighting and getting jealous of each other. But good story anyway.
    October 24th, 2011 at 04:25pm
  • ztnewpete

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    I love Luke , Jase is just a bitch :)
    October 16th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • dreamgirl13

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    I love luke!!!! :)
    October 15th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • Let.It.Rain

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    I love this story!!!! But I hate Jase, no matter what....she avid take Casey nd go run off with Luke! :)
    October 7th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • Fading-Away

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    I still don't like him.
    Get Kailey and Luke together!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Update soon. :)
    Much love. Xx
    October 7th, 2011 at 01:48am
  • Fading-Away

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    I think that Jase is an ass, and she should leave him, take her son, let Kelsey look after him, and work as much as she bloody well wants/needs to.
    He's too overbearing and it's pissing me off. He'll abuse her soon enough.
    October 6th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • Fading-Away

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    I really love your story, but for some reason the title just wrecks it for me.
    No offense, I just don't like it as "Not Meant". Nothing against you of course.
    For some unknown reason I've been puzzling over this and you said at some point that they weren't meant to be together, and that made me think: "Unfated Love". Just makes sense to me. And it's just a suggestion, you don't have to change it. I'm just being picky, I suppose.
    September 16th, 2011 at 02:44am