Blank Stare - Comments

I love your layout, so beautiful!
But back to the story, i'm actually quite excited to read what happens next. I wonder how everything is going to fall in place and how John is going to react to it all. Update already girl!

i don't really read the maine fan-ficts, but this one might change my mind. i absolutely loved the first chapter. it was very well written (because you wrote it, duhhh! aha) but i agree with everything nearly headless; said. john is being a bastard and his girlfriend seems like a total bitch. ha. update soon please!!

i love you!! <3 holly.

JOHN, Y U BEING SUCH A COLD BASTARD?!?! OPEN YOUR EYES BOY, YOU'RE ABOUT TO LOSE SOMEONE SPECIAL!

Aside from that, I really like the beginning! Poor Hayden, she's only telling the truth. John is such a little... I won't say it. ;D But he needs to stop being so naive and brainwashed! His girlfriend, what's her name... Vanessa, right? Well, she seems like a bitch. I hope Hayden slaps her silly. I really like the layout, too. It's lovely. :)

Anyway, I'm really excited for the next chapters! I've subscribed too. :)