Roses Are Red. So Is Blood. - Comments

Couldn't stop reading it. So addictive. :}

ok, im so sorry for this, but i saw a mistake in the second chapter. im so sorry for pointing this out, but anorexic is not eating anything at all, and bolemic is eating then barfing back up. again, im really really really sorry for pointing it out, but it just kinda stuck out to me. but, anyway, your story is reallllllllly good!

omg no!!! why leave it off like that!? DX i wanna knoww TT^TT
but it's good youre going to try to get it published(: its definately a different story i havent seen a story line like this before and its really good.(: im waiting for that next book :DDD

Awww I'm glad my comments make you happy! =D Your story is really good! And don't worry about your break up, that means there's someone better for you out there ^.^

Whenever i see a email saying update i look its another story im like oh yay. then when i see its this one im like O_O :DDD YAYYY!! :DD must read!! and i go to mibba immediately :3

Waiting for next update :33
i what shall happen at le party o-o

I want mooreeee! =D

The Layout is really plain. There isn't much to it. I'm not a fan of the blue font either. I don't like that the font doesn't match up with the picture either, but that's just my personal preference. The summary grabbed my attention. At first I thought that she might be some type of assassin or killer of some sorts, but after I read the first chapter I was wanting to read more to find out why it was happening.

In the first chapter I was a little confused as to why she wasn't more upset over the death of her mother, and why she would answer the phone in all of that mess. The police just show up, is it because a neighbor hears screaming or because she called them herself? I only found one mistake in the first chapter: I apologiesd, - apologized

In chapter two you have links of a little girl, a lady, and a box, it is against mibba rules to have links in the story chapters, but you can put them in the author's note. I found a few mistakes:

suppose to- supposed to.
"...time," She - lowercase S
"...bacon," She - lowercase S
anything, - anything. (period)
over heard - overheard
the foster lady that she thought - say that she thought?
up, up. (period)

I feel that with a few added details this could be much better. It is interesting and unique because I don't think I've ever read anything like this, but when I read it I feel like I'm reading it like this: I walked to the car. I got in the car. We left and went to her house. It's a bit mono tone.

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I never said Blake was the bad guy. He might have been just saying sorry as in sorry for your loss. cuz he hadn't said it to her yet. :P

I love the story! But I don't want Blake to be the bad guy! ='(

Just to make a correction, Anneroxis is when u dont eat for a long period of time. Bulimic is where you eat then force your self to throw up =(! +9!

He said "Sorry"??!!! OMG! I don't want to believe what I'm thinking!!! =X

-GASP- there's gonna be a sequel:D
Cant wait for the next chapters and the sequel!

I don't like Marissa and Robbie getting divorced... =/

o: Its grood(: :3333 i like like like :DD
WAiting for let next update:33
o: i wonder what happens o-o
i hope no one gets killed bye le creepy staker duude x-x

Update soon! =D

I'd buy it if you did! :D
XD i love how it did that though its funny but cool and it kept the flow nicely :3
just like Sora keeps the flow of heartless under control XD :33
Waiting fro next update! :DDD

OMG i love your story so much! I've been wanting to write a story on teen love, and your story has inspired m eso much. although i haven't started yet, i would love it and it would mean so much to me if you would take the time to read it if you would.

5 out of 5 stars!!! :)

Oh my cow!! XDD theyre togeth to-to-to-geethheerrr :DDDD
awh i really didnt expect it o-o but awh bunnies too!
o: wow i wish my mom would be cool like that XD
but wow YES another story! :DD Liebe liebe liebe liebe liebe! <3~~

You totally fooled me! hahahahaha xD And yes, it was AWESOME! I didn't expect that at all! But I loved it! Update soon! =D

XD RAWR....they kisseedddd!!! XD
sorry that was my reaction when i read that part :3 thought you deserved to know that :D
o-o oh no no no no no no.... whats gonna happen!?!? DX now i really dont want blake to die o-o