Wow! i want to keep reading! im really interested in whats going to happen! :O i just found a small error at some point when she was talking on the phone, but besides that really great story! :) Oh, i also LOVED the summary!!
This is really interesting. I noticed one mistake, but who knows. It's four am here, I might be seeing things :)
I want to see where this goes, I LOVED the summary. And the picture in your layout? Creepy, :D Love love love, def. subscribing, hope to see more soon!
Nice chapters, :)
Ooo, Blake's all mysterious. :D