Obsessed. - Comments

This layout is so nice, I really like how all of the colors compliment each other well. Oranges, peaches, blacks and yellows I don't see story layouts using them a lot so it's nice.

This was a little disturbing because I thought it was going to be fluffy! I love how in the end you revealed it had no intention on letting her leave, even if she had fulfilled all of his requests, she would still stay with him. I think that's what actually kidnappers would do, say they would let them go but don't, so it's good to see it in writing.

One thing I saw in here that could be fixed was this part, Why do you look frighten... I think frighten should be frightened. But otherwise this was a good read. c:

This layout is so nice, I really like how all of the colors compliment each other well. Oranges, peaches, blacks and yellows I don't see story layouts using them a lot so it's nice.

This was a little disturbing because I thought it was going to be fluffy! I love how in the end you revealed it had no intention on letting her leave, even if she had fulfilled all of his requests, she would still stay with him. I think that's what actually kidnappers would do, say they would let them go but don't, so it's good to see it in writing.

One thing I saw in here that could be fixed was this part, Why do you look frighten... I think frighten should be frightened. But otherwise this was a good read. c:

Wow! Just wow!
Amazing truly.
Loved it! : D

Thanks!

The layout was absolutely gorgeous and perfect. I loved loved loved it. The actual story was so creepy! The saddest part is, there are real people out there that do that. Stalkerish things like that creep me out! I liked how Steve new everything about her, and finally took her one day. The fact that he killed her surprised me (well, it would've surprised me more if it didn't say "Contains: Death" in the summary, haha). Anyway, great job! (:

Thank you.

That's kind of a little scary! You wrote it in a way that was almost sympathetic to the main character, but he's frightening. The scariest part is that there really are people like that out there, and some of them really are very calm and wholly fixated like that. You captured it perfectly. Nicely done!