Taste of Her - Comments

This story is so cool!!!

Wow Brendon is stupid...William marked her for a reason

You write Brendon so well that I totally despise him. Which is saying something because I would climb that boy like a tree any day of the week!
I almost agree with the comment above: William seems to be the better choice for Harper. He's under control and I don't think he'd hurt her. However, I think Pete wants what's best for her in a more appropriate way. Does that make sense? I hope it makes sense. I've been watching The Walking Dead all day and I doubt there's much of a brain left in my skull.
THANK YOU FOR THE BEAUTIFUL UPDATE!

Wow see what I mean her and william together is just prefect, pete annoys me and if not will then harp and patrick woud be lovely

Omfg. This is one of the stories when I honestly don't know who I want Harper to be with. My heart is screaming WILLIAM but I feel like it'll be Pete. :( Can't wait for the next chapter!

Started this story today and read it all lol! You got me hooked!! Love Pete :) can't wait for more girly!!

Hehe, I <3 Brendon Urie!!

Update soon please?

Thanks

Disenchanted Lies.

I love this story, the plot is well thought out, and the story flows!

Oh, Pete's point of view is refreshing. It's nice to know how he truly feels.
And Beckett's vampire persona is written flawlessly. Great job!
Do I sense a little True Blood reference up in here?! "True death" "marked human"?! Sounds like season one to me! I love all of this so much! Great job! KEEP WRITING FOR ME!

Nooo!
What's your problem, Peter?! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM?! She was just kidding...and then you decide to be butt hurt about it...and then you attack her like that? Christ, take a midol and have a snickers, you diva!
GAH! I knew that's who "Beckett" was. This hurt me because I LOVE William Beckett just so so so much. Oh God, what will I do?
:)

And inner dialogues don't confuse. I actually kind of like to know what's going on in a character's head.
I think I write that way too.
Huh.
:)

Oh my Odin!
He bit her?! Oh fuck, that was too good. Oh fuck. Those teeth...I've got that music video playing on repeat in my mind and it's frustrating me beyond belief.
Oh my God. That was perfect. I like how sweet he's being (much to Harper's chagrin) and now I like that she's taking control. No more fear. That's good.
I love this!

I'm commenting once for each new chapter.
First of all...UNF. Pete, you're killing me smalls. Stop with the...and the...your hands...and I can imagine your eyes right now...and those teeth...gah. You're a life ruiner.
I love this.

Looove it.

This is honestly my favorite story, keep it coming:D

omfg :D

PETE'S POINT OF VIEW IS AWESOME!!!!! you should defiantly keep up with that, because I personally love know what goes on in that messed up head of his. And you did a good job with it, I'd be scared to write in his point of view…I'd mess up his façade. As for Harper, I didn't expect her to be so….obedient. I can't wait though, what happens when Joe, Andy, and Patrick get home. Like is Harper going to be like, "Oh yeah, my ex, William, is beating the shit out of Pete. And I found out he is a vampire. Oh by the way, Pete and I had sex…no big deal" It would be funny, she tends to talk a lot in situations like that I've noticed.

So I hope this makes up for the crappy one sentence comments I've been leaving. Update soon please <3

I just find it surprising he left without a word...if William liked her then why did he leave
Pete's gonna have to open a can wop ass on those vampires

I know that william is bad and all that jazz but I still like him and harper being together

heey well you asked for it but i don't know what to say. except that i love your story and that i hope you update soon again (even if you just did :P)

Still excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter :)