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  • jaye.

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    I love this story! I can't wait for more :)
    December 31st, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Beckah Louise

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    Loving this story right now! Well written and original! Keep the updates coming!!

    <3 <3
    December 31st, 2011 at 12:42am
  • Fire and Ash.

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    I LOVE this story, William is awesome!! <3

    Update soon please?

    :D

    Disenchanted Lies.
    December 30th, 2011 at 12:43pm
  • linda99

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    love it <33
    December 30th, 2011 at 10:39am
  • mibbacute!

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    your story is so cool...'nuff said :)
    December 30th, 2011 at 09:16am
  • ItWasAlwaysBri

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    Holy crap!! I was not expecting that!!! This is not good, not good at all!! William's gonna end up taking Harper hostage or something, I just have a feeling. Hmm... Thank you for the exciting update. :)
    December 30th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    Amazing. Loving Pete and his after sex issues, never expected him being sensitive since he is like a mr tough guy sort of figure. And yes! William is back, and now Harper is screwed. Can't wait to read more :)
    December 30th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • dayXdreamXbeliever

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    Awww yeeaaahh! Too much love to fully express right now :D
    December 30th, 2011 at 05:59am
  • steph goes rawr.

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    OMG BILL.
    December 30th, 2011 at 05:32am
  • shortygirl

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    Well Pete obviously has some issues after sex...i was wondering when she'd run into William again
    December 30th, 2011 at 05:29am
  • DJ awesomeness

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    You write perfectly. And it would be even mooorrre perfect if you update really fast! ;D
    December 29th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • ItWasAlwaysBri

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    I believe that inner dialogue that you incorporate into this story really helps me understand what they're thinking exactly, without making me decipher it. Sometimes writers tend to leave clues to how a character is feeling or what they're thinking, but they leave you to guess. And sometimes that is very frustrating for readers, especially when it's critical to the story. So, no, your style of writing is perfectly fine in my eyes. Stick to what you've been doing and that will be wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this story. It's one of the more intriguing stories that I have read. You always leave me wanting more, and wondering what your characters will do next. So... Thank You!
    December 29th, 2011 at 07:16am
  • steph goes rawr.

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    Oh my goodness, this story is fabulous. I want to see more William! :( Or Brendon. More Pete would be good too. :D MAYBE ALL THREE SOON!??! <3 Love this and please don't get discouraged--you're a wonderful writer and this is a great story!
    December 29th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • Jordan::

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    I just looooove this story :) And Pete Wentz as a vampire, is it possible that it makes him more attractive? lol Please update soon! :)
    December 29th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    I love the ramblings! I find it really funny, and not at all confusing! this was a really good update :D
    December 29th, 2011 at 12:19am
  • dakunaito

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    It makes sense to me.........thx for an awesome update
    December 29th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • shortygirl

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    Even thouugh they were just kissing that was hott.....
    I dont find your writing confusing...yea they tend to ramble but that what's going through there mind....i tend to ramble alot
    December 28th, 2011 at 10:37pm
  • bb-8

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    I just started reading this and I love it! I might be obsessed. :P
    I'm really excited to see what the next chapter has in store :)
    December 28th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • Starfeesh

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    I loved this chapter so much!! UPDATE SO I CAN KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
    December 28th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • the0end

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    Amazing chapter, plz update soon
    December 28th, 2011 at 12:30pm
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