I dont know whether my first child will be a boy or a girl. If its a girl though, its name is definetly going to be Akaya. :) On account of I had that name in a dream.
I've been reading your story, and honestly its sweet. I think its good, really do! I'm sorry that girl replied nastily, but hey- b*tches be b*tches. Keep it going, remember, don't ever let anybody keep yoy down, if you love writing that's all that matters, f*ck whatever anyone else says! Thanks for telling a good story, ill be waiting for chapter 20.
Hiya, I just finished reading what you have so far and I love it!! You should definitely keep going with it. It doesn't matter if it's not extremely descriptive, I've read stories where people literally put a adjective with every word, and yours is 10x better! One of my favourite Vampire Stories! :D *Subscribed* Dea, x
I like your idea when it comes to this story, but, there's a lot of misspelled words and sentences that are just wrong. I've been thinking of copying the text and paste it in a document just for me to see. A document in which I would rewrite it so that it wouldn't be an eyesore anymore. But then I would read it as I'm correcting it and then I wouldn't be able to enjoy the new one. So, what I'm saying is, please check your grammar before you post it because I really like it and it would suck if I wouldn't be able to keep reading it because of its badly grammar.