HI!!! Just writing to say I have fallin in LOVE! With ur story! It's one of the best things I've read. No it is the best thing i've read! It's just the story I've been looking for! I just wanna keep Reading more :D. Ur a amazing writer. An I can't wait to read other story by you. Ur very good at writing and u paint a very perfect picture with how discriptive you are :). Pls keep writing this story! Pls and thank you <3 btw sorry if this is messy/ spelled wrong alot I'm off a iPod.
No! Don't you dare stop writing this! I love this story, it's one of the only ones I've subscribed to. I don't subscribe to much, but I love this story. Fuck that girl and her opinion. It's all down to you and if you want to continue, I love this by the way, did I mention that?
Loooovvveee this story :D you gotta keep it up, don't let other people's shit talk get to you. Not everyone is gonna like it, but by the looks of things most people do love it :D just be happy about the good comments, take in the constructive stuff and fuck the horrible shit :D
Why would someone say your story is bad? What I don't get from haters, is that they go out of their way to insult others on their writing style, rather then not thinking that with just one click of a button, they won't have to look at that story again. For someone to take the time to do that, they obviously don't hate it. They most likely wish that they had thought of it themselves, and are jealouse. Personally, I think your writing is waaaaay better then most. I love this story and the way it is going. Your writing style is also easy for me to understand, and I don't get lost (which, surprisingly enough, actually happens with some stories on this. The writers don't put full stops or capital letters down, or not in the right spot. It irritates me and gets me confused.) Don't let the hater's get you down. Really it just gives you more publicity.
LOVE love love love love love it! Oh did I mention how much I L O V E IT? :) You should really update soon, dont worry bout that girl sending you that nasty message, she is just jealous because this is a truly amazing! :)
This story is awesome! Don't let anyone get u down about ur writing skills, they're is nothing wrong with them. Some people just have different tastes in writting.
As I've already said, (if you read authors notes) that this story is just something i do in my spare time. It's not exactly a story i'm really serious about, but I am to my Fallen story, which I've had a little writers block on, but am on a new chapter chapter as we type. I know it's not written well, because i don't mind it being that way. So, read authors notes, please.
The story is great, how its written is not so great. You need to be more descriptive. To me, it seems like your just listing events instead of creating vivid descriptive scenes that is required to make a successful pie e or work. I can tell you have the creative potential, so just work on being more descriptive instead of just listing.
lol. I love Ella. 'Good.' Only 'Good'? Just 'Good'? Well excuse me your highness if it does not seem to fully appeal to your likeing, which you have said so by calling it just 'Good'. 'Good' means 'good, but I wouldn't eat it everyday'. So, because of the chocolate being just as 'Good' as you said it was, would you prefer it if we gave it to your sister instead?