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  • JustThinking

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    FINALLY! I was wondering when she was going to punch Daphney in the face! Juat what I needed to go on for a while longer, with Jake and her.. muhaha.. I hope her nose is broken.. xD going away from this now, other than that I'm glad that she regaining some of her badass attitude. She needs it, and well yeah, it makes her a bit more interesting as a character, when she is a bit more badass.

    also, it's kind of funny the whole 'the guy that left her is an idiot,' not haha funny. but funny =) and I totally agree with Jake.. his an idiot. A probably enchanted (or something like that) idiot - but still an idiot...

    More soon please =)
    October 28th, 2011 at 12:27pm
  • clearlyconfused

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    Please make him remember her already!
    My damn, I hate Daphney!! =/
    October 28th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • ShadowArcher

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    I really hate Daphney -.-
    October 25th, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • JustThinking

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    it seems like every opportunity slips through their fingers like dry sand.. when they could be so much more.. (Lige ved og næsten, slår ingen mand af hesten <- danish saying, it just pretty much means the same thing as I just worte.. But I think this sounds better xD )

    Other than that, I'm sticking to the idea that there's a bitch fight there is just waiting to happen (I think that is how you say it.. but.. yeah.. can't think right now.. so this will have to do..)

    More soon please! =D
    October 25th, 2011 at 02:58pm
  • xoxogal404

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    Pls have him remember soon! I really liked it when they were together!
    October 25th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • Art_Flavor

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    That bitch Dapheny is really getting on my nerves.
    Update Soon :-)
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:51am
  • clearlyconfused

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    Oh my damn! Please have him remember her already, your killing me here!!
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:23am
  • xoxogal404

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    I really want him to remember her! Please update soon!
    October 24th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • forbiddensecrets

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    I like it <3
    October 23rd, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • ducky17

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    sorry twin! I haven't had time to read in a while :( the last few chapters were great :) but i kinda feel like ur dragging it out just a little bit. i hope i have been of some assistance to ur AWESOME writing abilities and it's coming ain't quite nicely
    October 23rd, 2011 at 08:33am
  • ProudThespian

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    update soon! :D
    October 22nd, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • JustThinking

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    hmm.. I think I'm waiting for some badass battle thing between liz an daphney.. something even more painfull.. IDK, just something.. other than that, I'm still a fan of the story. but being honest.. I think I liked number 1 and 2 better.. just saying.. but that might just be because I'm still kind of a bit confused in this story. Not that you can help me with that. I think it will be better for me when I have read even more of the story =)

    either way, I'm looking forward to the next chapter =D
    October 22nd, 2011 at 03:16pm
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Hey, awesome chapter! sorry i haven't commented before, but i am now!! ><

    When will he remember Lizzy?! :(

    ;D

    Disenchanted Lies.
    October 22nd, 2011 at 12:46pm
  • Fire and Ash.

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    Hey, awesome chapter! sorry i haven't commented before, but i am now!! ><

    When will he remember Lizzy?! :(

    ;D

    Disenchanted
    October 22nd, 2011 at 12:46pm
  • JustThinking

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    hmmm.. at least he's thinking about her a lot.. but will it help in the end, when he probably won't do anything to upset Daphney (he is so whipped x) lol) maybe he will remember after she's given birth and looks into their childs eyes.. or some other random thing that I haven't thought of yet.. but either way, I'm sure you know best =)

    more soon please ^.^
    October 9th, 2011 at 03:13pm
  • xoxogal404

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    Thank you sooo much for updating!! And I agree with clearlyconfused ...I want them to get back together so bad that I'm pretty sure it's gonna drive me insane lol keep up the great work and please update soon!
    October 8th, 2011 at 04:19am
  • clearlyconfused

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    OMG ,please have him remember already your killing me here! xD
    October 7th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • xoxogal404

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    Pls update very soon!!! I want him to remember her sooo bad!!!!
    September 29th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • JustThinking

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    first of all.. how do you pronounce Baike??

    second thing Baike sounds like a cool person and I'm looking forward to reading more about her.
    still as good as I remembered it to be (and that was not a hint.. but a comment on MY OWN memory problem..)

    third thing: MORE WHENEVER YOU CAN =)
    September 27th, 2011 at 09:00pm
  • ducky17

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    I AM SOO SORRY FOR NOT COMMENTING TWIN! I have been so busy it's insane... anywho, great chapters! but...it feels like ur kinda dragging it out for a big scene :) can't wait. i miss u... luv u and talk 2 soon
    September 25th, 2011 at 05:13pm