well it sounds really good so far. so if you keep it up, I think it will be a great story and I'm still wondering why this is happening... is there an explanation coming up, 'cause I would really like one! more soon please. =D
that is so mean twin! i don't live in hell... u no longer goto asu so u r no longer a sundevil wick means y can now be a wildcat ;) hehe anyway more important stuff.. loved the chapter even though it was a little short, i still really love this story! the plot line is great keep up the good work hag. love ya and I'll see u soon ;)
okay i normally dnt cuss, but the bitch is pushing it.i dnt care if i was prego, if i was liz i would get my pregnant ass up and whoop her ass. keep updating plzzz, the story just got a whole lot interesting.
tell lee lee i said congrats on her tournament that took u away from me! interesting chapter...little bit shortbut still good. keep up the good work twin :D
dang............... good start just sad that they had an argument (sp?). happy that she's pregnant (van she have twins a boy and a girl? plzzzzz), and keep updating plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Uuh I get to comment first! hell yeah. =D anyways, I'm looking forward to this. curious as hell (as if that's a new thing xD ) and wanting that next chapter to come soon. =D
other than that, it sounds like a good start to the story. I just don't know what to exspect right now. so before I start rambling I'll stop my comment here, with a: yay the story continues! =D