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  • Nanook

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    Hmm... so I just stumbled across this and just wanted to leave a comment saying how much I loved it! Very cute story. :) First one I've actually read in full for quite a while... I've been stopping with reading a lot of stories lately, but I didn't with this one. :)
    You're an amazing writer. And I just wanted to tell you that. Even though it's been a while since it's been completed, just thought I would let you know. I hope you're still writing, even if it's not on here. <3
    June 26th, 2015 at 10:09am
  • basket case

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    I read this whole thing in one day. I loved it, well done!
    September 18th, 2012 at 03:26pm
  • gerardwaytoocool

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    If I would ever have an otp between a real person and an original character, his would be it. Seriously, everything makes me want to scream like a fangirl.
    September 14th, 2012 at 10:49pm
  • ATLSweetObsession

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    Absolutely amazing!! There should be more comments!!:):) please update soo!! I'm addicted to your story i've read it in just one day!! Love it:)
    September 7th, 2012 at 12:54am
  • shortygirl

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    loved the update
    November 14th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • shortygirl

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    I can only imagine who they will find for Zach....
    October 22nd, 2011 at 05:22am
  • shortygirl

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    Cass sounds like a big ball of energy
    October 10th, 2011 at 06:58am
  • HisGirl

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    You need to hurry and write more!!! I love it so much
    October 1st, 2011 at 09:08pm
  • shortygirl

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    Hmm Alex in a towel...nice mental image :)

    Poor Zooey her mom can't remember
    October 1st, 2011 at 03:14am
  • shortygirl

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    Im glad her mom likes Alex
    September 26th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • sunshine0788

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    I read your story yesterday and today and I love it! :) Alex and Zoey are so cute and Jack and Tay..just aaw :)
    I hope that was enough from this creeper guy. Am excited for more
    September 23rd, 2011 at 11:15pm
  • shortygirl

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    Dancing in the rain...sounds like me...
    September 22nd, 2011 at 03:23am
  • shortygirl

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    having sex while covered in chocolate frosting yummy
    September 19th, 2011 at 03:16am
  • shortygirl

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    Rian and Cass how cute
    September 16th, 2011 at 06:56am
  • shortygirl

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    Diamonds are a girls best friend lol...there finally gonna meet each others parents
    September 13th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • takeontheworld

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    this is so cute, i'm obsessed with this story! Keep writing! :)
    September 10th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • shortygirl

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    I hope the lawyer doesn't come back but i would like to know what happened to him...laser tag idk hopefully everyone is careful
    September 10th, 2011 at 07:58pm
  • shortygirl

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    I thought they were living by themselves....i hope she gets better
    September 10th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • shortygirl

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    I wonder what Rian was gonna say...hmmm. Poor Jack he didn't get his hug
    September 8th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • shortygirl

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    I wouldn't wanna go back there either
    September 7th, 2011 at 03:06am
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