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  • shortygirl

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    I wonder if Jack told him and creepy fan alright
    August 26th, 2011 at 02:55am
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    I f i heard that i wouldn't be able to fake sleeping
    August 25th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • davefranco

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    I'm all caught with the two new chapters. Safe to say I loved them, but what's new there? I think Jack's little confession was so cute, I knew he was jealous. Maybe a Taylor/Jack hookup could possibly be in the cards? Can't wait to read on and see where Alex & Zooey's adventure takes them ;)!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 05:30pm
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    Pillow fights in there underwear that is funny
    August 23rd, 2011 at 02:25am
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    Aww, thank you for the update! It was a lovely surprise when I scrolled down my subscription list and seen you had updated :) This chapter was awesome, I especially loved the part where Zooey was rocking out with Taylor. I wonder what's up with Jack though? I've got a feeling there's a little twang of jealousy somewhere inside him. Anyway, I hope you have an amazing time meeting ATL! I'm totally not envious or anything... hahaha. Keep up the great work! <3
    August 21st, 2011 at 12:21am
  • shortygirl

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    the tec guys need to give her a break...
    August 20th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • davefranco

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    Eeeeeeeeeek, I was totally fangirling reading your latest chapter! Hahahaha, i've got this huge grin on my face right now. Not even kidding. Go Team Alex & Zooey! They are so adorable together. I really love this and I can't wait to see where you're headed with it :)
    August 20th, 2011 at 02:28am
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    They make a good couple
    August 20th, 2011 at 12:41am
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    awww how cute...
    August 18th, 2011 at 09:56pm
  • KaylaInMotion

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    Love love loooove this story :)
    Please update soon.
    August 18th, 2011 at 04:35pm
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    Oh and where are these so called stars?
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • shortygirl

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    Okay the lawyer is still a creep and wow i can only imagine the looks she got....
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • davefranco

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    I think this is definitely one of the saddest storylines that I've come across. Nevertheless, you put so much emotion into it and you make it a great read. I'm in love with this story, if you couldn't already tell. The lawyer is seriously starting to freak me out and i'm beginning to wonder what his obsession with Zooey is all about? One thing is for sure - I cannot wait to find out :) I know you're busy, but please update as soon as you can. + You have to tell me all about you're experience of meeting All Time Low. I'm super jealous >.< Hahaha, have fun!
    August 17th, 2011 at 08:08pm
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    Okay the creepy lawyer needs to stop calling
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • LumosMaximus

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    I LOVE IT!!!! This is such an amazing story, and something I can easily connect wityh. I'm subscribing now-can't wait for the next update!!!!
    August 16th, 2011 at 02:07am
  • davefranco

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    This is amazing. I'm a huge All Time Low fan and when I find a story that I really connect with, it makes reading and waiting for updates 100 times more exciting. I love Alex & Zooey's blossoming romance, it's so cute. I also adore her friendship with Jack, who i've got this really weird, awkward crush on, haha. I love Zooey's background story, about her parents and her grandmother. You can tell you've thought this story out a lot and I honestly don't understand why you've only got 2 comments. I am so looking forward to the next update :) Keep up the amazing, (dirty) work! <3
    August 16th, 2011 at 02:00am
  • KaylaInMotion

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    Super awesome story :) can't wait to read more
    August 15th, 2011 at 10:35pm
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    Love this story! I like the chapter with the beanie. It's soo cute. Please update soon(:
    August 9th, 2011 at 11:53pm
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