You shouldn't be so down on yourself about your writing. You've really done a brilliant job with both the characters and the plot. I'll be waiting for more updates :3
This is the best criminal minds fic I've ever read, you've captured Spencer so well! I'd already subscribed by the end of chapter one so please do update this soon :)
I just came across this story, I must admit I have a thing for Reid. I haven't read it all, but I'll definitely take care of it in the next couple of days. I love the description of Reid in the first chapter. It's funny that he's awkward and sort of weird looking but still amazingly appealing to the eye, there's something about his face that makes him incredibly beautiful, love how you portrait that :)
This deserves WAY more comments than I see here. I can't describe how mych I love this story. You completely have the charachers down. Spencer, Garcia, Morgan- all of them. I can totally picture it. As for lydia, I love her. i wanna be her. No big deal. But seriously, I love the E.E Cummings poem you put in chapter 8. I'm really close to that poem and it fit very well in the story. This is probably the best CM story I've read. Well done.
I love the teasing that comes from the team when it concerns Spencer, and i love Garcia's concern when it comes to the case and Spencer's worry, i like how you're kinda of having her step in in JJ's shoes when it comes to Spence. :) I also love how you have Lydia and Spencer's relationship involve, how their 'i love yous' weren't words said in the throes of passion or in some dramatic shoot down i guess, i love that it was simple them being them. BTW LOVE LOVE LOVE Poetic Spencer...amazing lol. Can't wait for the new chapter...no matter how long it takes XD
Your writing is simply fantastic. You are a very brilliant writer and I am glad that I just happen to stumble upon your story. Please update soon, you are bloody amazing! :)
My reaction to coming to the end of the last chapter of this story. "GAH!" :P Wonderful wonderful story!!! I love Lydia and i love how you write spencer!! Can't wait for more!!!
Amazing yet again! I loved it, and the whole time he had his migraine I was thinking that they should just have sex, because it helps and than WHAM you wrote it lol. Anyways, I really enjoyed them spending the day together and cannot wait for the next chapter. =D
I love the Bright Eye's quote at the beginning and everything that comes after. This is the best Criminal Minds fan fiction I've seen on here and I think your writing is amazing.
I really liked the new chapter! It was cute, especially the ending. They are so adorkable! lol Cannot wait for the next chapter. If it is better than this last one (which I really enjoyed) then I think you should update ASAP! lol. Anyway, like I said great chapter! =D