Stuck in the Middle - Comments

Loved the update! :D
Hm... I wonder what's got Elaine so down? Is it missing Avery or... is something else going on?
And ooh... she's got her eyes on another guy too. At the beach and all. And that guy didn't seem to like Nick too much. :o
Can't wait to see what you have next in store! Amazing update Ash! :D

Yeah, another update! Woo! :D
Loved the new chapter! :) Great job with the update. Aw... Jeremy called Elaine beautiful. But she thought he was just joking. Poor girl. I can kind of relate to her. :(
And she wants him to be hers, but after all they've been through... that would be tough to happen. Hmph... but Avery just wants both of them to be happy, so I'm sure she'd like that they were together, because they make each other happy. :)
Again, great update! Can't wait for more! :D

Yay, Ashley, you updated! :D
I really hope you both are able to update this more frequently. It looks like you're both getting back into the writing groove. :)
I'm glad that Jeremy apologized to Elaine. They really need to be there for one another. They can't just... shut each other out, that won't be good if they do. :(
Great update, though, Ash! Lauren, I hope you're able to post the next update soon! :)



^^ Pascal really hopes you post it soon too! :D

Oh my!
You two need to update soon!!
And you need more comments on this wonderful story! :D

Update please!!

Good update. :)
Poor Elaine. She went to be there for Jeremy and needed comfort herself but he just pushed her away. :( He should've thought about what he was going to say more. :/
Can't wait to see how Avery contacts Lainey for the first time. And how Lainey will react.
Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Aw, yay! You posted the first update! :D
Great job with it. :) Um... the only thing I have to mention is like, the way Jeremy's mom acted. Like... it had only been a week and she was already telling him to move on. I get where you're going with that, but maybe you might want to change the time you put there. Like make it a month or so later, and he was still like that. Or something a little longer than a week... idk. I just... I was kind of upset for him when she said that, you know? Especially since it was someone he loved and really cared about. :( But you may have just done that for the timing of the story and everything, so... yeah.
You don't have to change it, feel free to like, totally ignore me. And hopefully you don't get mad at me for pointing that out... please don't be mad. :( Just a thought I wanted to confront. Other than that, though, you're golden. :)
Really, really can't wait to see what all you have in store for this. :) Can't wait for more!
And once again, it was an honor to make the banner. :D

I am very, very excited for this. Like, you two have no idea. :)
Can't wait for it to start! But take your time, really.
Definitely... subscribed! :D
The layout is looking amazing! :) I'm glad my banner works for it. lol.