Against the Sun, We're the Enemy - Comments

Loved it <3
Bit pissed that Mikey had to die, but I loved it nonetheless :)
It's a shame you had to end it :( but if it had to end at all, you did it perfectly <3

I'll be honest, I don't know much about the Killjoys (I know, I know, I'm a horrible MCR fan. My sense of music has changed over the past few years). Your Prologue though, was awesome, it told me everything that I needed to know in order to understand what the background of the Killjoys so I wouldn't be lost in the story. You explained it really well. (Plus, "but he’s tough as nails and tons of fun… and not just when he’s in bed" made me smile and get all excited.)

Your descriptions throughout the story are really, really good. Sometimes people just have strong descriptions in the beginning and then they slack off but yours are pretty consistent throughout and you control dialogue really well. I love how besides the Frerard there is actually a real plot to the story itself, too.

But…The sex scenes are still my favorite :D They were so sexy and I was smiling and squealing at the hot detail as I read it!

What an amazing story. I gotta admit, usually I'm not a fan of reading Killjoy fics, no clue why to be honest, but this was just amazing. Although, I am so totally devistated that Kobra Kid had to die, but I can see how it was essential to the plot line. So, thanks for another great story!

I loved this story it really was one that deserves 5 stars ***** yayyyyy hears five stars for u. (: keep on righting because your amazing at it. <3

xo Axel

That was a really beautiful way to end it love, I really liked it <3

I knew it would be Mikey ;-;

Yessss revengerevengerevenge!
I loved this! x

NOOOOOOOOO :((((((( Poor MIkey !!!!!!!!!! o_O
please please please please please pleas update ??????????

oh it's good you updated again.
the two chapters are amazing,but it wasn't very nice of mikey to interrupt them like that :D

keep updating, cause this is soo good♥

BLi or killjoys? Which is better, there's only one way to find out:
FIIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!!

you've got this all written already? Nice! It's good to see you back on here if I'm honest :) I've missed you <3

aww it's so sweet but sad that it might be their last time :'(
Oh well done for ruining it mikey -_-

it's okay love, how could I not forgive you after just a sweet and loving chapter. It genuinely made me awwww a little! Hope you're well <3

This is so awesome! i'm glad korse kept his word for once :)
p.s how do u make a charectors page?

WOOO gonna kick some ass when the fight goes down. Im so happy Frankie's alive. Damn Korse needs his fucking nuts shot off. Loved the update :D

xo Axel

that was...wow o.o poor Frankie. You are being so mean to him in your stories right now xD

I actually forgot to breath for some of that story :O

Frank!!!! uh oh :/ stupid korse and his stuipid gun :P

Frank!!!! uh oh :/ stupid korse and his stuipid gun :P

:O HOW CAN YOU DO THAT TO YOUR FRANKIE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!