Shut up. You are as amazing as the whole killjoyverse, and I'mma make you see it through my comments :) <3. This was a really good chapter, really fucking hot chapter actually. I liked how it wasn't all rose petals and soft words. It was real for the situation they were in :) it was really good ^_^.
This is quite good!! I like what you could be building towards...I'll be interested to see where you take this, how your characters and plot develop!! Keep up the good work!