I love the prologue. It's short, succinct, and promises another fabulous story. (But hopefully this one will have the happily ever after we all want for Kitty). Update soon?
People are shy readers that's why they don't comment. But your work is so enjoyable to read! Don't keep the lack of comments prevent you from doing what you like. I hope the sequel is out soon! Anyway, if I could give you any ideas, maybe there should be a point where Draco has to ignore/avoid Kitty to keep her safe, and she never got a reply from him. After awhile she changes(becomes stronger in magic) and one day sees Draco again and he has to get her to understand and come back to him. I don't know, random idea if you ever had a writer's block! Hope you're doing fine in college! c: One last question, just wondering, why did you give Kitty short boyish hair? I imagined different haha.