If This Was a Movie, It Wouldn't Be Like This - Comments

  • sixftdeep

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    I'd love to co-author this :$
    June 21st, 2012 at 12:49am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Don't stop! i really like this! you should probably have them try to make another baby or something like that. or that Lee has a brother he never knew about. or it could be both! anywho.... Subscribed!!
    December 16th, 2011 at 07:34pm
  • Sammy_Wessen

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    I am not a pussy...but this chapter was sad :( she is so strong!!!! I wonder what's going to happen next!!!
    October 15th, 2011 at 02:16am
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    Yay! You updated! Cannot wait for the next chapter! It's getting so good!
    October 13th, 2011 at 05:13pm
  • Treason

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    hilarious.
    August 29th, 2011 at 05:38pm
  • Sammy_Wessen

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    The last chapter was rather boring, but it's a filler. I can't wait for the next one though!
    August 17th, 2011 at 05:41pm
  • Sammy_Wessen

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    This is amazing! I loved everything! Yes, there are minor mistakes, but whatever! This story is amazing and i can't wait to read the rest!!
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:20pm
  • swwamy

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    I really like it <3
    You are a good writer Tika. :D
    August 16th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • sixftdeep

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    I really like the story line, it has drama, and a lot of suspense, *subscribed* I don't think you're moving too fast with the characters, it really shows that they can't live without each other.
    August 15th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • tonoxic

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    This...is really good and hell a lot of interesting. Minor mistakes but no big deal really. I'm subscribing and hoping a next chapter comes out real soon.
    August 15th, 2011 at 03:04am
  • MerlinWeasley

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    You're a good writer. :)
    There was one sentence, though, that was really bugging me: Moms Ford Fusion was gone and so wasn't Dads Chevy Malibu.
    That one had an error, but the rest seemed real good, and it was written well.
    I can't wait to see where this is going to go.
    August 15th, 2011 at 01:36am