This story is adorable (well not all of it ;) But, it's amazing to say the least and I love it! I literally cannot wait for the next update so you better do one soon!!!!
Finally! lol kidding, take as long as you need to...not too long tho! Yay! She's moving in with him! And I'm glad Leila is ok, now Craig needs to get better :D
Thanks for the story comment :) I do try to include lots of twists, so I'm glad you spotted those. Don't worry, there will be more suspense before this story is finished :D
wow, a lot of confusion in the story. its set up nice, and the layout adds to the atmosphere. It seems very descriptive of characters, and love how you separate the dialog, making it easier to read. Twists are key, so add in more of them. I see some already but you can never have enough. Leaving questions at the end of a chapter keep people intrigued, thus giving you more subscriptions. A lot of people love this story already, so you now your on the right path. add in more suspense and keep them checking for your updates and you will do fine.