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  • forever_hustler

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    omg omg omg. this whole series is perfect, please please update soooon <33
    September 23rd, 2012 at 12:14am
  • halfmoonkid

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    haha I loved this!! This should be interesting...I'm excited to see how Jack's plan turns out! Update soon?!?!
    September 13th, 2012 at 12:52am
  • sailor of the skies.

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    Ohhh boy this should be interesting.
    More soon pleaseee!!!
    September 12th, 2012 at 11:56pm
  • Songs In The Sky

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    Oh man, I just read this whole thing and I'm hooked.
    I can't wait for an update! :D
    September 12th, 2012 at 02:10am
  • erratic

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    “Do you really wanna take the next step in your relationship or are you just horny?”

    Oh Jack, you're too funny. As for Avery's situation, I hope that gets resolved soon. I can only imagine how frustrated she must be.
    September 11th, 2012 at 10:25pm
  • shortygirl

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    loved the update
    September 11th, 2012 at 09:14pm
  • erratic

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    Too cute! It's great that Alex has taken the initiative to take things slow with Avery this time around. It looks like the wait was worth it for the both of them.
    August 7th, 2012 at 08:49am
  • sailor of the skies.

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    Ahhhhh I loved it :) it was so perfect!
    More soon please!!!
    August 5th, 2012 at 02:34pm
  • heeytara

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    i want him!
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • shortygirl

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    Aww he made her breakfast how cute..i want a man like that
    August 5th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • ATLSweetObsession

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    SOOOO CUUUTE!! I LOVE IT!! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!:):):):)
    August 1st, 2012 at 01:02pm
  • AllTimeBatman

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    awww how sweet :D
    July 28th, 2012 at 10:59pm
  • erratic

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    TOO. FUCKING. CUTE.

    Seriously. This chapter was just wonderful. It's about time that Avery and Alex sorted out their feelings and decided to try out a relationship. And their date was a lovely mixture of sweet and corny. Plus you can't go wrong with an adorably nervous Alex Gaskarth.
    July 26th, 2012 at 08:49am
  • sailor of the skies.

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    I seriously just love this story so much.
    More soon please!!!
    July 19th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • hiwagang hapis

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    "Are we just gonna ignore the giant elephant in the room?" I suddenly exclaims.
    Take note, the word 'exclaims' is present tense but I noticed that most of the verbs you used are in the past tense. The word 'exclaims' should be changed to 'exclaimed'.

    There are some grammatical and punctuation mark mistakes but all in all, this chapter is quite good.

    I just think it is best if you ask someone to proofread and edit your story before posting it.
    July 18th, 2012 at 12:06pm
  • shortygirl

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    Finaly there back together! I hpe they work out this time
    July 18th, 2012 at 02:41am
  • vmusicforlove

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    *happy dance* I hope they actually work out this time!!
    July 17th, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • mosher123

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    FINALLY! Yes this is what I've been waiting for. Please for the love of god NO MORE DRAMA!. Update soon.
    July 17th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    awww :]
    July 17th, 2012 at 05:33pm
  • erratic

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    Alex and Avery have a lot of unfinished business, so now that she's in LA, I'm hoping along with Jack that they finally talk things out. It's obvious that they're both still in love with each other, but Alex doesn't think the feelings are reciprocal and Avery is convinced that he is over their relationship.

    I'm crossing my fingers that this mess gets sorted out soon.

    Anyhow, thank you for posting another lovely chapter of this story!
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:34am
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