oh my god! This is so adorable! I'm a bit late on your contest prizes but I hope since her parents accepted Jimmy, that Jimmy can relax and show more of his cocky attitude. I wonder when she'll meet his friends (the rest of A7x) :D
amaaaazing update xD I've been waiting for this :D that date did sound like fun :P If I saw a film on called Attack of the Killer Tamatos I think I would have to watch it :D loved ;p Update soon please <3
So, first off, I really like the layout. It's simple yet cute. I really like the summary. It gives you an idea what this story is going to be about yet makes you want to go read more. You started off this story with a basic background of Faye's life; mentioning her kids and how she met Daniel and what happened with their relationship, which definitely helped me identity what kind of character she is. Her first meeting with Jimmy made me life. Here he was, lying sick on a hospital bed, and yet still he was hitting on his nurse. And the fact that she played along, added to their budding relationship. When she called him and received that 'lovely' greeting, I nearly died. XD This story has a good start and you're definitely an amazing writer!